July 18, 2025
Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people. The problem here is that in the activities we did I had a lot of mistakes. On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.
My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.
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this is capitalized with title case
usually the period would be omitted, but I thought it might be there for a stylistic reason
Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people.
no issues technically, but more normal would be
...the extra English class with the more "advanced"...
The problem here is that in the activities we did, I had a lot of mistakes.
more natural would be "I made" a lot of mistakes
On the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy.
it would likely be more common to say "...and it was kind of easy" to avoid repeating "activity" unnecessarily
Also, in the second one, I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder.
the comma after "also" shows a natural pause after the introductory adverb
the comma after "in the second one" might be technically optional, but it is common to put commas after introductory prepositional phrases
Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.
My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.
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Nice job and congratulations for going to the more advanced class. I think consuming and analyzing media in English is a great way to increase vocabulary skills. Books, movies, videos, music, et cetera.
You can also incorporate new vocabulary terms in your writing and speaking practice.
Those are at least things that have helped me while learning Spanish.
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Your writing is fluent and you express yourself well.
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Just keep trying! We learn through mistakes. :)
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On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers,
On the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. it would likely be more common to say "...and it was kind of easy" to avoid repeating "activity" unnecessarily |
Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Also, in the second one, I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. the comma after "also" shows a natural pause after the introductory adverb the comma after "in the second one" might be technically optional, but it is common to put commas after introductory prepositional phrases |
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