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Foxx24

Sept. 16, 2024

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English

For the moment, I'm focused on English.
Why am I focused on English ?
It's simple, first of all I love the langage.
Then I like to meet a lot of people and travel in the world.
During this summer I went in Texas for 1 month. I meet some friends and I would like to come back the next summer.
But with a better English level, because sometimes it's frustrated to don't understand what are people saying or inverse.
So I think that is my principal motivation.
It's also very important for me to speak well English, later I would like to work in cybersecurity and in this type of job English is very usefull.
To conclude I really start to practice a lot English since I think few months and I progress a lot so it's great.
Have a good day :)


Pour le moment, je me concentre sur l'anglais.
Pourquoi est-ce que je me concentre sur l'anglais ?
C'est simple, tout d'abord j'adore la langue.
Ensuite, j'aime rencontrer beaucoup de gens et voyager dans le monde.
Cet été, je suis allé au Texas pendant un mois. J'ai rencontré des amis et j'aimerais y retourner l'été prochain.
Mais avec un meilleur niveau d'anglais, parce que parfois c'est frustrant de ne pas comprendre ce que les gens disent, ou inversement.
Je pense donc que c'est ma principale motivation.
C'est aussi très important pour moi de bien parler anglais. Plus tard, j'aimerais travailler dans la cybersécurité et dans ce genre de métier, l'anglais est très utile.
Pour conclure, j'ai vraiment commencé à beaucoup pratiquer l'anglais depuis quelques mois et j'ai beaucoup progressé, donc c'est super.
Bonne journée :)

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English

For the moment, I'm focused on learning English.

Why am I focused on learning English ?

It's simple, first of allFirst of all, it's simple and I love the language.

Then I would like to meet a lot ofmany people and travel inaround the world.

It hasn't happened yet. It's better to use "would" here

During tThis summer, I went into Texas for 1 month.

When you're going to a place, we use the preposition "to"

I meet someade new friends and I would like to come back the next summer.

But with a better English level, because sometimes it's frustrated to don'ting not to understand what are people are saying or invice versea.

So I think that is my principalmain motivation.

It's also very important for me to speak wellgood English, later because I would like to work in cybersecurity and infor this type of job English is very usefull, it's important to know English.

To conclude I really, a few months ago, I start toed practice a lotsing English since I think few months and I progress a lot soand I have progressed greatly. So, it's great.

Have a good day :)

Feedback

Good-luck 💪🏾

English

For the momCurrently, I'm focused on (learning) English.

Why am I focused oin English ?

It's simple, f. First of all, I love theis language.

Then, I like to meet a lot of people and travel inaround the world.

During tThis summer I went intraveled to Texas for 1a month.

I meet some friends, and I would like to come back the next summer with a better English level.

But with a better English level, because sSometimes, it's frustrated to don'not understand what are people are saying or invice versea.

So I think that is my principalThis is my main motivation.

Made it sound more natural

It's also very important for me to speak well English, later well. I would eventually like to work in cybersecurity, and in this type of job English is very usefullEnglish would be beneficial to work in this field.

ToIn conclude I reallysion, I need to start to practiceing a lot of English since I . I progressed a lot withink a few months, and I progress a lot so it's great.

Have a good day. :)

English

ForAt the moment, I'm focused on English.

It's simple, f. First of all, I love the langage.

TheIn addition I like to meet a lot of people and travel in the world.

"In addition" or "Also". is used when you're listing reasons. "Then" is used when explaining something that happened one after the other or for listing steps on how to do something.

During tThis summer, I went into Texas for 1 month.

I meet some friends and I would like to come back thereturn next summer.

B but with a bettern improved English level, because sometimes it's frustrateding to don'not understand what are people are saying or invice-versea.

So, I think that is my principalmain motivation.

"principal" is correct but "main" is more natural.

It's also very important for me to speak wellgood English, later because in the future, I would like to work in cybersecurity and in this type of job English is very usefullgood English is very important for this kind of job.

To conclude, I really started to practice a lotmy English since I think few months and I progress a lot so ifrequently for about a few months and I have made a lot of progress so that's great.

Feedback

You're doing great and I hope you have a good day too!

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For the moment, I'm focused on English.


ForAt the moment, I'm focused on English.

For the momCurrently, I'm focused on (learning) English.

For the moment, I'm focused on learning English.

Why am I focused on English ?


Why am I focused oin English ?

Why am I focused on learning English ?

It's simple, first of all I love the langage.


It's simple, f. First of all, I love the langage.

It's simple, f. First of all, I love theis language.

It's simple, first of allFirst of all, it's simple and I love the language.

Then I like to meet a lot of people and travel in the world.


TheIn addition I like to meet a lot of people and travel in the world.

"In addition" or "Also". is used when you're listing reasons. "Then" is used when explaining something that happened one after the other or for listing steps on how to do something.

Then, I like to meet a lot of people and travel inaround the world.

Then I would like to meet a lot ofmany people and travel inaround the world.

It hasn't happened yet. It's better to use "would" here

During this summer I went in Texas for 1 month.


During tThis summer, I went into Texas for 1 month.

During tThis summer I went intraveled to Texas for 1a month.

During tThis summer, I went into Texas for 1 month.

When you're going to a place, we use the preposition "to"

I meet some friends and I would like to come back the next summer.


I meet some friends and I would like to come back thereturn next summer.

I meet some friends, and I would like to come back the next summer with a better English level.

I meet someade new friends and I would like to come back the next summer.

But with a better English level, because sometimes it's frustrated to don't understand what are people saying or inverse.


B but with a bettern improved English level, because sometimes it's frustrateding to don'not understand what are people are saying or invice-versea.

But with a better English level, because sSometimes, it's frustrated to don'not understand what are people are saying or invice versea.

But with a better English level, because sometimes it's frustrated to don'ting not to understand what are people are saying or invice versea.

So I think that is my principal motivation.


So, I think that is my principalmain motivation.

"principal" is correct but "main" is more natural.

So I think that is my principalThis is my main motivation.

Made it sound more natural

So I think that is my principalmain motivation.

It's also very important for me to speak well English, later I would like to work in cybersecurity and in this type of job English is very usefull.


It's also very important for me to speak wellgood English, later because in the future, I would like to work in cybersecurity and in this type of job English is very usefullgood English is very important for this kind of job.

It's also very important for me to speak well English, later well. I would eventually like to work in cybersecurity, and in this type of job English is very usefullEnglish would be beneficial to work in this field.

It's also very important for me to speak wellgood English, later because I would like to work in cybersecurity and infor this type of job English is very usefull, it's important to know English.

To conclude I really start to practice a lot English since I think few months and I progress a lot so it's great.


To conclude, I really started to practice a lotmy English since I think few months and I progress a lot so ifrequently for about a few months and I have made a lot of progress so that's great.

ToIn conclude I reallysion, I need to start to practiceing a lot of English since I . I progressed a lot withink a few months, and I progress a lot so it's great.

To conclude I really, a few months ago, I start toed practice a lotsing English since I think few months and I progress a lot soand I have progressed greatly. So, it's great.

Have a good day :)


Have a good day. :)

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