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ayumi

March 11, 2021

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I really like English because it would expand my world. I am busy everyday working and taking care of my child. I want to take time to learn English.


私は英語が好きだ、世界を広げてくれるから。毎日仕事と育児で忙しいけれど、英語を学ぶ時間を取りたいと思う。

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I really like English because learning it would expand my world.

I am busy everyday working and taking care of my child.

I want to take the time to learn English.

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ayumi

March 11, 2021

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Thank you for correcting l will enjoy studying English.

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I really like English because it would expand my world.


I really like English because learning it would expand my world.

I am busy everyday working and taking care of my child.


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I want to take time to learn English.


I want to take the time to learn English.

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