Jan. 23, 2022
End of the world!
End of the world!
2022 this first three was just finished.
The virus already makes me think the world is ending now.
Many people’s life is changing a lot because of that. (some in a good was, some in a bad way)
I am happy that I still can write diary in here.
Whenever I want or whenever I don’t want.
If you want to reduce your stress.
Hugging a kid can really help.
There is massive positive power can release from a small child.
End of the world!
End of the world!
2022 this- the first three waseeks have just finished.
Not quite sure what you want to say here.
The virus already makes me think the world is now ending now.
Many people’s life isves are changing a lot because of thatis.
(some in a good wasy, some in a bad way)
I am happy that I still can write my diary in here.
Whenever I want to or whenever I don’t want. to.
If you want to reduce your stress.
Hugging a kid can really help.
There is massive positive power canis release fromd when hugging a small child.
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I agree we need to support each other through the pandemic.
End of the world!
End of the world!
2022 this first three was just finished.
I'm also not sure what you mean. Do you mean that 2022 has just started?
The virus already makes me think the world is ending now.
This sounds more natural without the words "already," and "now."
Many people’s life isves are changing a lot because of thait.
The plural of "life" is "lives." The word "it" works better to reference the virus since you had just mentioned it in the sentence before.
(some in a good ways, some in a bad ways)
I am happy that I still can write diary in hereentries in here whenever I want.
You write /in/ a diary, but a diary entry is what you are writing:)
Whenever I want or whenever I don’t want.
I agree with the other poster, this sentence should be included in the one before it.
If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a child can really help.
Child sounds more natural than kid here. It tends to be a word used more lovingly.
Hugging a kid can really help.
Include this sentence in the previous one too.
There is massive positive powerenergy that can be released from a small child.
I think "energy" is the word you're looking for here.
Feedback
Well done :D
Many people’s life isves are changing a lot because of that.
(some in a good wasy, some in a bad way)
I am happy that I still can write diary inies here whenever I want.
Whenever I want or whenever I don’t want.
You should add this phrase to the end of your previous sentence.
If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a kid can really help.
Hugging a kid can really help.
You should add this phrase to the end of your previous sentence.
There is massive positive power that can be released from a small child.
2022 this first three was just finished.
Im not sure what you mean here.
The virus already makes me think the world is already ending now.
Many people’'s life isves are changing a lot because of that.
What's "that"?
(some in a good wasy, some in a bad way)
I a'm happy that I still can write a diary ion here whenever I want to.
I am feels more stiff and unnatural, but its not incorrect.
Whenever I want or whenever I don’t want.
If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a kid can really help.
Hugging a kid can really help.
There is massive positive power can release from a small child.
I'm not sure what you are trying to say here exactly.
Maybe "Small children give off a lot of positive energy."?
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The virus already makes me think the world is ending now. The virus The virus This sounds more natural without the words "already," and "now." The virus already makes me think the world is now ending |
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Many people’s life is changing a lot because of that. Many people What's "that"? Many people’s li Many people’s li The plural of "life" is "lives." The word "it" works better to reference the virus since you had just mentioned it in the sentence before. Many people’s li |
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I am happy that I still can write diary in here. I I am feels more stiff and unnatural, but its not incorrect. I am happy that I still can write diar I am happy that I still can write diary You write /in/ a diary, but a diary entry is what you are writing:) I am happy that I still can write my diary |
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Whenever I want or whenever I don’t want.
You should add this phrase to the end of your previous sentence.
I agree with the other poster, this sentence should be included in the one before it. Whenever I want to or whenever I don’t want |
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If you want to reduce your stress. If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a kid can really help. If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a kid can really help. If you want to reduce your stress, hugging a child can really help. Child sounds more natural than kid here. It tends to be a word used more lovingly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hugging a kid can really help.
Hugging a kid can really help. You should add this phrase to the end of your previous sentence.
Include this sentence in the previous one too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is massive positive power can release from a small child. There is massive positive power can release from a small child. I'm not sure what you are trying to say here exactly. Maybe "Small children give off a lot of positive energy."? There is massive positive power that can be released from a small child. There is massive positive I think "energy" is the word you're looking for here. There is massive positive power |
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