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alexwong2164

Nov. 11, 2020

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End Game

Start from tomorrow all the restaurants can only selling take out order.

Not allow eating inside any restaurants.

If this can stop the spread of the virus.

Why didn’t our Government make this rule few months ago!

If the infected numbers still keep getting in next few days.


I just don’t know what will happen!


I am watch “Japan Sinks (2020) - Season 01” now.


Maybe Hong Kong will also sinks too.


Or, already sink!

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End Game

Starting from tomorrow, all the restaurants can only selling take out orders.

Not allow eatingThere is no eating allowed inside any restaurants.

Here's an alternative: "No eating is allowed inside any restaurant".

If this can stop the spread of the virus., why didn’t our government make this rule a few months ago!

"If" is a subordinating conjuction, so any sentence that starts with it is a dependent clause that can't stand on its now. It needs to be attached to an independent clause, so I attached the next sentence to this one.

If the infected numbers still keep getting in next few days.number of infections still keep on rising over the next few days, I just don't know what will happen!

I am watching “Japan Sinks (2020) - Season 01” now.

Maybe Hong Kong will also sinks too.

"Also" and "too" are very similar in function, so you don't need to use both in the sentence.

Or, it has already siunk!

End Game


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Start from tomorrow all the restaurants can only selling take out order.


Starting from tomorrow, all the restaurants can only selling take out orders.

Not allow eating inside any restaurants.


Not allow eatingThere is no eating allowed inside any restaurants.

Here's an alternative: "No eating is allowed inside any restaurant".

If this can stop the spread of the virus.


If this can stop the spread of the virus., why didn’t our government make this rule a few months ago!

"If" is a subordinating conjuction, so any sentence that starts with it is a dependent clause that can't stand on its now. It needs to be attached to an independent clause, so I attached the next sentence to this one.

Why didn’t our Government make this rule few months ago!


If the infected numbers still keep getting in next few days.


If the infected numbers still keep getting in next few days.number of infections still keep on rising over the next few days, I just don't know what will happen!

I just don’t know what will happen!


I am watch “Japan Sinks (2020) - Season 01” now.


I am watching “Japan Sinks (2020) - Season 01” now.

Maybe Hong Kong will also sinks too.


Maybe Hong Kong will also sinks too.

"Also" and "too" are very similar in function, so you don't need to use both in the sentence.

Or, already sink!


Or, it has already siunk!

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