Feb. 26, 2021
Enclosed workstations or more open design
"In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? Explain, giving reasons to support your answer"
Talking about working, I strongly prefer to work in a place that have a more open design than an enclosed space. I will explain my reasons in the following.
First of all, I support the idea that working in an open design is more comfortable and relaxing for all employees. This is because the open design can possitively impact in their performance during the time-work. I say this reason in my work experience. I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had much energy in order to work appropiartely. Furthermore, this design gave me a feeling of freedom in my workplace.
My second reason is that having a more open design, the employee have got the opportunity to talk with other co-workers. It means that the human contact is extremely important to maintain a good performance during the work-time, compared to work in an enclosed workstations separated of other co-workers. In my experience, I could keep up with my good performance because of talking over with my co-workers helped me to my mental health and avoid stress from the job.
To sum up, I support the idea that working in an open space is better than working in a cubicles or enclosed spaces, thus this condition gives employees many advantages during their work-time.
TalSpeaking aboutof working, I strongly prefer to work in a place that haves a more open design than an enclosed space.
There is nothing inherently wrong about the statement "talking about working," but it sounds a bit awkward. As a native speaker, I would more likely say "on the topic of working" or "speaking of working." Have can be used for the pronoun I and when you are speaking of a group of thing. For example, one would say "places that HAVE a more open design, " and "place that HAS a more open design."
I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
One might ask, the following what? It sounds a little awkward to end the sentence with following because it leaves it a bit unclear.
This is because the open design can possitively impact in their performance during the time-work day.
The word in is not needed after impact. Additionally, a native English speaker would most likely not say time-work, we would say work day.
I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had mucha lot of energy in order to work appropriartely.
A lot of energy sounds more smooth than much energy
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This was a very well crafted response, well done! I think you have a wide range of vocabulary, and your phrases tend to flow very well. Bien hecho, keep up the good work!
Feb. 27, 2021
Thanks for your time!
First of all, I support the idea that working in an open design is more comfortable and relaxing for all employees.
This is because the open design can possitively impact in their performance during the time-work.
You made a spelling error; "possitively" should be "positively".
I say this reason inbecause of my work experience.
Your wording was a bit awkward.
I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had much energy in order to work appropriartely.
You made another spelling error; "appropiartely" should be "appropriately".
My sSecond reason is thatly, having a more open design, the employee have gots the opportunity to talk with other co-workers.
It means that the human contact is extremely important to maintain a good performance during the work-time, compared to work in an enclosed workstations separated of other co-workers.
In my experience, I could keep up with my good performance because of talking over with my co-workers helped me to my mental health and avoid stress from the job.
To sum up, I support the idea that working in an open space is better than working in a cubicles or enclosed spaces, thbecause this conditionenvironment gives employees many advantages during their work-time.
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You did a very good job!
Feb. 27, 2021
I really appreciate your help, thanks!
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Enclosed workstations or more open design |
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"In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. |
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Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. |
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Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? |
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Explain, giving reasons to support your answer" |
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Talking about working, I strongly prefer to work in a place that have a more open design than an enclosed space.
There is nothing inherently wrong about the statement "talking about working," but it sounds a bit awkward. As a native speaker, I would more likely say "on the topic of working" or "speaking of working." Have can be used for the pronoun I and when you are speaking of a group of thing. For example, one would say "places that HAVE a more open design, " and "place that HAS a more open design." |
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I will explain my reasons in the following. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. One might ask, the following what? It sounds a little awkward to end the sentence with following because it leaves it a bit unclear. |
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First of all, I support the idea that working in an open design is more comfortable and relaxing for all employees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is because the open design can possitively impact in their performance during the time-work. This is because the open design can pos You made a spelling error; "possitively" should be "positively". This is because the open design can pos The word in is not needed after impact. Additionally, a native English speaker would most likely not say time-work, we would say work day. |
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I say this reason in my work experience. I say this Your wording was a bit awkward. |
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I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had much energy in order to work appropiartely. I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had much energy in order to work appropria You made another spelling error; "appropiartely" should be "appropriately". I remember while I was working, I felt excellent and had A lot of energy sounds more smooth than much energy |
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Furthermore, this design gave me a feeling of freedom in my workplace. |
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My second reason is that having a more open design, the employee have got the opportunity to talk with other co-workers.
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It means that the human contact is extremely important to maintain a good performance during the work-time, compared to work in an enclosed workstations separated of other co-workers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my experience, I could keep up with my good performance because of talking over with my co-workers helped me to my mental health and avoid stress from the job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To sum up, I support the idea that working in an open space is better than working in a cubicles or enclosed spaces, thus this condition gives employees many advantages during their work-time. To sum up, I support the idea that working in an open space is better than working in a cubicles or enclosed spaces, |
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