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Employee's Happy Record

A day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning. My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week. I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the innovation curriculum. This is very difficult for us, we looked for information, discussed a lot. We were not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.
Even late study, they always make me laugh. I believe that inside the classroom lived a Funny Elf. Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.


The day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning. My tutor invited me into a group of psychological counseling supervisorand asked me to give a report next week. I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the new curriculum.This is very difficult for us. We looked for information and discussed a lot.We are not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with children who are just ten years younger than me. They always make me laugh.I believe that inside the classroom lives a Funny Elf. Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.

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I have had a very busy day today.

I was revising my paper in the morning.

My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week.

I felt nervous, but I tried.

Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.

I have had a very busy day today.

My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week.

I was talking to a teacher about the innovation curriculum.

I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.

Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.

I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.

I have had a very busy day today.

I was revising my paper in the morning.

I felt nervous, but I tried.

Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.

I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.

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18274211076

March 25, 2023

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My tutor invited me into a [consulting group] and asked me to give a report next week.

A consulting group is usually a company, such as Accenture, that provides consulting services to other companies. Is this what you mean?

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18274211076

March 25, 2023

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18274211076

March 25, 2023

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I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.

“Only ten years younger than me” means that you feel this age difference is small. For example, you’re normally with children who are 20 years younger than you, but these kids were just 10 years younger than you. Is this what you mean to say?

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18274211076

March 25, 2023

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Even late study, they always make me laugh.

“Even late study” doesn’t make sense.

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March 25, 2023

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I was talking to a teacher about the [innovation curriculum].

What do you mean by “innovation curriculum”? It sounds like you will be teaching about innovation, for example innovation that occurred 200 years ago.

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JoeTofu

March 25, 2023

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these kids were just 10 years younger than me.

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JoeTofu

March 25, 2023

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Thank you for your guidance. I am not talking about a consulting agency or consulting company. It is a group of several people.

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I have had a very busy day today.


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I was revising my paper in the morning.


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My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week.


My tutor invited me into a [consulting group] and asked me to give a report next week. My tutor invited me into a [consulting group] and asked me to give a report next week.

A consulting group is usually a company, such as Accenture, that provides consulting services to other companies. Is this what you mean?

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I felt nervous, but I tried.


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I was talking to a teacher about the innovation curriculum.


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This is very difficult for us, we looked for information, discussed a lot.


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We were not done yet.


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I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.


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“Only ten years younger than me” means that you feel this age difference is small. For example, you’re normally with children who are 20 years younger than you, but these kids were just 10 years younger than you. Is this what you mean to say?

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Even late study, they always make me laugh.


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I believe that inside the classroom lived a Funny Elf.


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Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.


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I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.


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I am enjoying my life and I hope you are, too. I am enjoying my life and I hope you are, too.

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