March 24, 2023
Employee's Happy Record
A day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning. My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week. I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the innovation curriculum. This is very difficult for us, we looked for information, discussed a lot. We were not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.
Even late study, they always make me laugh. I believe that inside the classroom lived a Funny Elf. Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.
The day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning. My tutor invited me into a group of psychological counseling supervisorand asked me to give a report next week. I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the new curriculum.This is very difficult for us. We looked for information and discussed a lot.We are not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with children who are just ten years younger than me. They always make me laugh.I believe that inside the classroom lives a Funny Elf. Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.
An Employee's Happy Record
AThe day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning.
My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week.
I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the innovationve curriculum.
This is very difficult for us, w. We looked forup information, and discussed it a lot.
We weare not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than meI (am).
Even during late study, they always make me laugh.
I believe that inside the classroom liveds a Funny Elf.
Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are, too.
Feedback
Good for you and very nicely written!
A day wais twenty-four hours long, but it seemed longerto be longer today.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning.
Alternative: In the morning, I was revising my paper.
My tutor invited me into a consulting group and asked me to give a report next week.
I felt nervous, but I tried (my best).
I was talking to a teacher about the innovation curriculum.
We wereare still not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.
Even during late study, they always make me laugh.
I believe that inside the classroom lived a Funny Elf.
More natural: I believe that a Funny Elf lived inside the classroom
Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.
A The day was twenty-four hours long but seemed longer.
I have had a very busy day today.
I was revising my paper in the morning.
My tutor invited me into a [consulting group] and asked me to give a report next week.
A consulting group is usually a company, such as Accenture, that provides consulting services to other companies. Is this what you mean?
I felt nervous, but I tried.
I was talking to a teacher about the [innovation curriculum].
What do you mean by “innovation curriculum”? It sounds like you will be teaching about innovation, for example innovation that occurred 200 years ago.
This is very difficult for us, w. We looked for information, and discussed a lot.
We we are not done yet.
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.
“Only ten years younger than me” means that you feel this age difference is small. For example, you’re normally with children who are 20 years younger than you, but these kids were just 10 years younger than you. Is this what you mean to say?
Even late study, they always make me laugh.
“Even late study” doesn’t make sense.
I believe that inside the classroom liveds a Funny Elf. more natural: …that a funny elf lives in the classroom.
Otherwise I can't explain why we are always laughing in class.
I am enjoying my life and I hope you are too.
March 25, 2023
My tutor invited me into a [consulting group] and asked me to give a report next week.
Thank you for your guidance. I am not talking about a consulting agency or consulting company. It is a group of several people.
March 25, 2023
Thank you for your guidance. 对我帮助很大，十分感谢。
March 25, 2023
I spent the afternoon with the children who were only ten years younger than me.
these kids were just 10 years younger than me.
March 25, 2023
Even late study, they always make me laugh.
Thank you. It is means a class in the evrning.
March 25, 2023
I was talking to a teacher about the [innovation curriculum].
Ok, I get it! Thank you.
March 25, 2023
these kids were just 10 years younger than me.
So you want to emphasize that 10 is small number of years? 你年纪和他们的年纪只有差十岁。
March 25, 2023
Thank you for your guidance. I am not talking about a consulting agency or consulting company. It is a group of several people.
What is the purpose of the group---what do they do together?
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