Nov. 14, 2020
My previous post mention when I pick a drama to watch.
I will usually pick action, comedy, sci-fi…types.
Yesterday I’ve talked to a friend he is only 20 something.
So, when he picks a drama to watch is only base 1 condition.
Protagonists must be good looking….
Maybe when I was that age will make the same decision.
Anyway, he suggests me to watch this drama.
After only the first 10 minutes I love it already.
This drama got many jokes about an American live in Paris but know nothing about France.
I lived in UK for 7 years, I do think I know a little about French.
I can’t stop laugh now.
My previous post mentions when I pick a dramaat shows I tend to watch.
I used show instead of drama since drama sounds like a more deep and emotional show.
I will usually pick action, comedy, or sci-fi…types.
Yesterday I’ve talked to a friend he i, who's only 20 somethinglike 20.
So, when he picksed a dramashow to watch isbased only base 1on one condition ...
PThat the protagonists must be good looking….
Maybe when I was that age will, I would have makde the same decision.
You used past tense in the first part "when I was that age" so it wouldn't make sense for you to make the same decision in the future
Anyway, he suggestsed for me to watch this dramashow.
You said it happened yesterday so it should be in the past.
AfterI've only watched the first 10 minutes but I love it already.
I reworded it a bit since I couldn't figure out how to make it sound right
This drama gotshow has so many jokes about an American liveing in Paris but knows nothing about France.
I lived in the UK for 7 years, I do think but I know a little about Freanche.
French is for the language, France is the place.
I can’t stop laughing now.
Feedback
Be careful with your tenses.
I haven't watched the show but it looks interesting since I like France.
Emily in Paris
My previous post mention whens how I pick a drama to watch.
I will usually pick something with action, comedy, or sci-fi…typ themes.
Yesterday I’ve talked to a friend hewho is only 20 something.
So, when he picks a drama to watch it is only base 1d on one condition.
Protagonists must be good looking….
Maybe when I was that age willI makde the same decision.
Anyway, he suggests me toed that I watch this drama.
This drama got many jokes for being about an American liveing in Paris but knowing nothing about France.
I lived in UK for 7 years, but I do think I know a little about French culture.
I can’t stop laughing now.
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My previous post mention when I pick a drama to watch. My previous post mention My previous post mentions wh I used show instead of drama since drama sounds like a more deep and emotional show. |
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I will usually pick action, comedy, sci-fi…types. I will usually pick something with action, comedy I |
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Yesterday I’ve talked to a friend he is only 20 something. Yesterday I’ve talked to a friend Yesterday I |
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So, when he picks a drama to watch is only base 1 condition. So, when he picks a drama to watch it is only base So, |
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Protagonists must be good looking…. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Maybe when I was that age will make the same decision. Maybe when I was that age Maybe when I was that age You used past tense in the first part "when I was that age" so it wouldn't make sense for you to make the same decision in the future |
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Anyway, he suggests me to watch this drama. Anyway, he suggest Anyway, he suggest You said it happened yesterday so it should be in the past. |
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After only the first 10 minutes I love it already.
I reworded it a bit since I couldn't figure out how to make it sound right |
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This drama got many jokes about an American live in Paris but know nothing about France. This drama got many jokes for being about an American liv This |
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I lived in UK for 7 years, I do think I know a little about French. I lived in UK for 7 years, but I do think I know a little about French culture. I lived in the UK for 7 years French is for the language, France is the place. |
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I can’t stop laugh now. I can’t stop laughing now. I can’t stop laughing now. |
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