Feb. 5, 2022
Embarrassment Situation During Trip
About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.
During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities for transfers.
During the trip, I had an embarrassment situation because I took a wrong train.
It meant I should change all scheduled trains, and it was not possible at that time.
I noticed the situation and I took off the train after 10 minutes later.
The next scheduled train was 50 km far from my location and 1 hour left.
I took a taxi and fortunately, I could take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.
It was the most nervous moment during traveling, but I remember it as one of interesting memories, now.
About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.
DuringFor 3 days, I took more than 20 trains, and I visited 10 cities for transfers.
During the trip, I had an embarrassmenting situation because I took athe wrong train.
It meant I should change all scheduledmy trains, andbut it was not possible at that time.
I noticed the situationmy mistake, and I tookgot off the train after 10 minutes later.
The next scheduled train was 50 km far from my location and 1 hour leftwould not come for another hour.
I took a taxi and fortunately, I couldwas able to take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.
It was the most nervouse-wracking moment during traveling, but I remember it as one of interesting memories, now.
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Embarrassmenting Situation During a Trip
About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.
During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities forin transfers.it.
During the trip, I had an embarrassmenting situation because I took a wrong train.
It meant I shouldhad to change all scheduled trains, and ithat was not possible at that time.
I noticrealised the situation and I took off the train afterwhich left 10 minutes later.
The next scheduled train was 50 km far from my location and I had only 1 hour left.
I took a taxi and fortunately, I couldwas able to take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.
It was the most nervous momenstressful part during my traveling, but now I remember it as one of the most interesting memories, now.
Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you so much.
About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.
DuringOver 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 different cities forduring transfers.
During the trip, I had an embarrassmenting situation because I took agot on the wrong train.
"Took a wrong train" and "got on the wrong train" mean the same thing, so this is a stylistic change.
ItMy mistake meant I shwould have to change all scheduled trains, and it was not possible at thatof the trains I scheduled before, and I couldn't do that so close to the departure times.
I added "so close to the departure times" to provide more context about why you could not change the scheduled trains.
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Re-worded the sentence a little bit, and added some more words for context.
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I tookwas able to hail a taxi and fortunately, I could take the next traiarrived at the station 5 minutes before ithe next train departed.
"Hail a taxi" is a common phrase in English, same meaning as "take a taxi" or "catch a taxi".
It was the most nervous moment duringI felt while traveling, but now I remember it as one of most interesting memories, now too.
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Feb. 6, 2022
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Embarrassmenting Situation During a Trip
About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.
During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities for transfers.
During the trip, I had an embarrassmenting situation because I took a wrong train.
It meant, I should have changed all my scheduled trains, and it was not possible at that time.
I noticed the situation and I tookgot off the train after 10 minutes later.
The next scheduled train was 50 km faraway from my location and 1 hour leftater.
I took a taxi and fortunately, I couldwas able to take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.
It was the most nervousstressful moment during travelinghe trip, but I remember it as one of the most interesting memories, now.
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Good job! I recommend creating flashcards with the sentences that I corrected, leaving blanks for each correction. 👍
Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you! I will use flashcards.
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