July 3, 2022
Good morning, Mr. William. I hope this email finds you well.
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or through my employer but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.
Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation. I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention in the whole process.
All the best!
Good morning, Mr. William.________
With the title "Mr." you need to use the last name.
I hope this email finds you well.
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.
I was trying to access somen't able to find (procure) any grants, financial aid, or through my employer but employer assistance, so I can't afford the master's degree right now , and I did not want to give a deliberafinite answer.
Items in a series must be of the same grammatical category.
Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation.
I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention inthroughout the whole process.
throughout is more precise.
All the best!
Email Task Example - IELTS
Good morning, Mr. William.,
I hope this email finds you well.
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.
I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or to get support through my employer, but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.
What do you think "deliberate" means? It sure doesn't fit here.
Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation.
I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention during the whole process.
All the best!
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Bien hecho.
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Good morning, Mr. William. Good morning, Mr. William Good morning, Mr. With the title "Mr." you need to use the last name. |
I hope this email finds you well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or through my employer but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer. I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or to get support through my employer, but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer. What do you think "deliberate" means? It sure doesn't fit here. I was Items in a series must be of the same grammatical category. |
Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention in the whole process. I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention during the whole process. I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention throughout is more precise. |
All the best! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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