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DavidGB

July 3, 2022

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Email Task Example - IELTS

Good morning, Mr. William. I hope this email finds you well.

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or through my employer but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.

Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation. I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention in the whole process.

All the best!

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Good morning, Mr. William.________

With the title "Mr." you need to use the last name.

I hope this email finds you well.

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.

I was trying to access somen't able to find (procure) any grants, financial aid, or through my employer but employer assistance, so I can't afford the master's degree right now , and I did not want to give a deliberafinite answer.

Items in a series must be of the same grammatical category.

Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation.

I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention inthroughout the whole process.

throughout is more precise.

All the best!

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DavidGB

July 4, 2022

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Thank you very much, nycsharpe!

Email Task Example - IELTS

Good morning, Mr. William.,

I hope this email finds you well.

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.

I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or to get support through my employer, but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.

What do you think "deliberate" means? It sure doesn't fit here.

Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation.

I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention during the whole process.

All the best!

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Bien hecho.

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DavidGB

July 4, 2022

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Many thanks, diggn!

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diggn

July 4, 2022

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Many thanks, diggn!

Most welcome, David.

Email Task Example - IELTS


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Good morning, Mr. William.


Good morning, Mr. William.,

Good morning, Mr. William.________

With the title "Mr." you need to use the last name.

I hope this email finds you well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or through my employer but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.


I was trying to access some grants, financial aid, or to get support through my employer, but I can't afford the master's degree right now and I did not want to give a deliberate answer.

What do you think "deliberate" means? It sure doesn't fit here.

I was trying to access somen't able to find (procure) any grants, financial aid, or through my employer but employer assistance, so I can't afford the master's degree right now , and I did not want to give a deliberafinite answer.

Items in a series must be of the same grammatical category.

Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue with the admission process due to my financial situation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention in the whole process.


I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention during the whole process.

I really want to thank you very much for your valuable time and attention inthroughout the whole process.

throughout is more precise.

All the best!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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