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EMAIL - My requested suggestions for team productivity.
Dear Susy,
Thank you for your email. I am glad to help with my suggestions .
Firstly, to improve the produtivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.
Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiils in performing their duties effeciently.
Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.
I hope these ideas are helpful. Please let me know if you need further information.
Sincerely,
Renata
EMAIL - MyAs requested, my suggestions for team productivity.
The original sentence is fine by grammar rules, but just comes across as a little unnatural in the word choice. I think that's because of the ambiguity between "my requested suggestions" meaning suggestions from you that were requested, or suggestions you requested from someone else.
You can clean up this ambiguity with different phrasing like suggested above.
I am glad to help with my suggestions .
Firstly, to improve the productivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month.
Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiills in performing their duties effeiciently.
Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already been scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish.
yesterday
Thanks so much.
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EMAIL - My requested suggestions for team productivity.
The original sentence is fine by grammar rules, but just comes across as a little unnatural in the word choice. I think that's because of the ambiguity between "my requested suggestions" meaning suggestions from you that were requested, or suggestions you requested from someone else. You can clean up this ambiguity with different phrasing like suggested above. |
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Dear Susy, |
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Thank you for your email. |
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I am glad to help with my suggestions . I am glad to help with my suggestions |
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Firstly, to improve the produtivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month. Firstly, to improve the productivity in the office I recommend creating a reward incentive program for all employees who strive to achieve their goals during the month. |
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Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's skiils in performing their duties effeciently. Secondly, I propose organizing training sessions to strengthen the team's ski |
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Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish. Finally, I would like to inform you that our monthly meeting has already been scheduled for next week and we could announce these possible decisions to everyone if you wish. |
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I hope these ideas are helpful. |
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Please let me know if you need further information. |
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Sincerely, |
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Renata |
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