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Pochka

Feb. 22, 2021

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Email (I'm going to join an English conversation class)

Hello, Sam

My name is Pochka. I heard from my friend Psina, that you are running an English conversation club, and I'd like to join this club. I've been learning the English language for six years at school and I'd like to practice my English skills, which I have. My native languages are Russian and Belarusian. I really want to improve my foreign language: its speaking and sounding. Hope you will see this email soon.

All the best,
Pochka.

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Email (I'm going to join an English conversation class)

Hello, Sam

My name is Pochka.

I heard from my friend Psina, that you are running an English conversation club, and I'd like to join this club.

We would not put a comma in between "I heard" and the "that" clause that expresses what you heard

I've been learning the English language for six years at school and I'd like to practice mythe English skills, which that I have.

What you wrote is not wrong grammatically, but sounded very odd, so I rephrased it to not not sound odd

My native languages are Russian and Belarusian.

I really want to improve my foreign language: its, both speaking and soundingpronunciation.

Or "... my foreign language skills in speech and pronunciation"

Or maybe you meant "my English skills in speaking and listening" ?

(I'm not sure what you meant by "sounding")

Hope you will see this email soon.

All the best,

Pochka.

Hope you will see this email soon.


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All the best,


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Pochka.


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Email (I'm going to join an English conversation class)


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Hello, Sam


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My name is Pochka.


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I heard from my friend Psina, that you are running an English conversation club, and I'd like to join this club.


I heard from my friend Psina, that you are running an English conversation club, and I'd like to join this club.

We would not put a comma in between "I heard" and the "that" clause that expresses what you heard

I've been learning the English language for six years at school and I'd like to practice my English skills, which I have.


I've been learning the English language for six years at school and I'd like to practice mythe English skills, which that I have.

What you wrote is not wrong grammatically, but sounded very odd, so I rephrased it to not not sound odd

My native languages are Russian and Belarusian.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really want to improve my foreign language: its speaking and sounding.


I really want to improve my foreign language: its, both speaking and soundingpronunciation.

Or "... my foreign language skills in speech and pronunciation" Or maybe you meant "my English skills in speaking and listening" ? (I'm not sure what you meant by "sounding")

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