Aug. 21, 2025
Dear Jo,
I went to a new restaurant last weekend. The restaurant is clear. Waiters are excellent and friendly universally. The decoration in the restaurant is so royal. I went to the restaurant with family. Then, food was put up. The food is very delicious. I felt it was an experience. I hope I will email you.
Dear Jo, I went to a new restaurant last weekend.
The restaurant iwas clear.
Last weekend is in the past, hence it is “was” instead of “is”
Waiters awere excellent and friendly universally. friendly
Same thing as the previous one, it is in the past.
“Universally” is in front of friendly as it is used to describe what type of friendliness it is.
The decoration in the restaurant iwas so royal.!
Could be more enthusiastic as it is to someone close, it being informal.
I went to the restaurant with family.
The food iwas very delicious.
I felt it was ant was a memorable experience.
You can’t have a feeling that it is an experience because it already is.
I hope I will email youto hear from you soon.
You are already writing this email, so you can only hope for an early response back.
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I advice you to learn more about grammar, past, present and future tense as it will help you a lot in forming sentences. And also for sentence forming, make it make sense. You can translate from your native language if it helps you! And more expression can be used in informal writing.
Dear Jo, I went to a new restaurant last weekend.
The restaurant is clearnot crowded.
Waiters are all excellent and friendly universally.
The decoration in the restaurant is so royal.
I went to the restaurant with my family.
Then, the food was put upbrought.
The food iwas very delicious.
I felt it was an amazing experience.
I hope I will emailget an email from you.
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Dear Jo, I went to a new restaurant last weekend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The restaurant is clear. The restaurant is The restaurant Last weekend is in the past, hence it is “was” instead of “is” |
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Waiters are excellent and friendly universally. Waiters are all excellent and friendly Waiters Same thing as the previous one, it is in the past. “Universally” is in front of friendly as it is used to describe what type of friendliness it is. |
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The decoration in the restaurant is so royal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The decoration in the restaurant Could be more enthusiastic as it is to someone close, it being informal. |
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I went to the restaurant with family. I went to the restaurant with my family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, food was put up. Then, the food was |
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The food is very delicious. The food The food |
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I felt it was an experience. I felt it was an amazing experience. I You can’t have a feeling that it is an experience because it already is. |
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I hope I will email you. I hope I will I hope You are already writing this email, so you can only hope for an early response back. |
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