April 21, 2025
Subject: I need to repair my car.
To: AutoMac Service Team.
I'm reaching out to express my intention to repair my car. I noticed a problem with the battery and I cannot start up the car normally. The model is a Hyundai Tucson 2025.
Kindly inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures to fix it or replace it. I would appreciate if you can let me know the schedule of the service center and how can I book my visit.
I am looking forward to your assistance and prompt response.
Kind regards,
Claudio.
I have noticed a problem with the battery and I cannot start up the car normally.
KindlyPlease, could you inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures necessary to fix it or replace it.
It is more polite to include a please
I would appreciate if you canould let me know the schedule of the service center and how can I book my visit.
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Overall, a well structured email with only minor mistakes. Well done!
Subject: I need to repair my car.
To: AutoMac Service Team.
I'm reaching out to express my intention to repair my car.
I noticed a problem with the battery and I cannot start up the car normally.
The model is a Hyundai Tucson 2025.
Kindly inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures to fix it or replace it.
I might add a "please" at the beginning if I wanted to be just a little more polite: "Please kindly inform..."
Or maybe even something like: "If you could please kindly inform. . .to fix it or replace it, that would be lovely."
I would appreciate if you can let me know the schedule of the service center and how I can I book my visit.
Although you are requesting information, this sentence is (grammatically) a statement, not a question. So it makes more sense to phrase it as "I can", not "can I".
I am looking forward to your assistance and prompt response.
Kind regards, Claudio.
Feedback
Nicely written! Formal, but that's what you want in an email like this.
Subject: I need to repair my car.
To: AutoMac Service Team.
I'm reaching out to express my intention to repair my car.
I noticed a problem with the battery and I cannot start up the car normally.
The model is a Hyundai Tucson 2025.
Kindly inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures to fix it or replace it.
I would appreciate if you can let me know the schedule of the service center and how I can I book my visit.
Normally how can I would be correct because it's normally being asked in the context of a question, but because this is a request in the form of a statement after "and" it actually makes more sense to say "how I can".
I am looking forward to your assistance and prompt response.
Kind regards, Claudio.
Feedback
Vast majority of this is perfect, very formal but that makes sense because this is a business transaction. Awesome work!
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Kindly inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures to fix it or replace it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Kindly inform me about the price of a new battery and procedures to fix it or replace it. I might add a "please" at the beginning if I wanted to be just a little more polite: "Please kindly inform..." Or maybe even something like: "If you could please kindly inform. . .to fix it or replace it, that would be lovely."
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