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skeshech

June 30, 2025

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Eleventh Day of Intense Study

Today is the eleventh day of my little challenge: I'm going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days. Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two the most important things. First is a English sentence structure and second is articles. I will study it all tomorrow.

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game. How director said: the show will get a sad ending. But I don't think so, sinse a first season I have thoughts about it. This show trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to do something overstep. And the main character trying to save everybody and proof that he was right and his faith in people is truly. I guess is not a true and a frontman is right. These people had a choice: countinue the games or not. And they made this choice. So, anyway the main character wouldn't saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

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Eleventh Day of Intense Study

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two of the most important things.

First is a English sentence structure and second is articles.

I will study it all tomorrow.

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game.

But I don't think so, sinse a first season I have thoughts about it.

This show trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to do something oversteputrageous.

"overstep" just doesn't fit here, but "outrageous" flows with your ideas of doing something that is unexpected and often time unethical

And the main character trying to save everybody and proof that he was right and his faith in people is truly.

I guess is not a true and a frontman is right.

These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.

And they made this choice.

So, anyway the main character wouldn't saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

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I loved talking about your opinion in another language. it was truly inspiring

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skeshech

July 1, 2025

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Thank you!

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two thehe two most important things.

First is an English sentence structure and second is articles.

Whenever 'a' is in front of a word that starts with a vowel it becomes 'an'

HowThe director said: that "the show will gethave a sad ending".

'How director said' doesn't make sense. You could say 'How the director said "the show will have a sad ending" ...' but you would need to complete the sentence with a comment on what the director said otherwise its unfinished. For example you could say 'How the director said "the show will have a sad ending", I don't think it will'. A show can technically 'get' a sad ending but it's more natural to use the verb 'to have' in this context

But I don't think soit will, sinsce ain the first season I have thoughts about it., <fill in reason>

I joined 'But I don't think so' to the sentence above in the earlier comment and modified it to make it make sense. The second part of this sentence 'sinse a first season I have thoughts about it. ' doesn't make sense because it's unfinished. You could say 'since in the first season everyone was happy' but 'I have thoughts about it' is not a reason for why you think it won't have a sad ending so it doesn't really make sense.

This show is trying to tell us that people can forgoet about atheir morality and nudge other people to do something overstepignore their own as well.

I presume 'something overstep' you were trying to express that people can forget their morality and therefore influence others to forget their own morality as well.

And tThe main character trying to save everybody andwas proof that he was right and his faith in people is strulyong.

'And' cannot be used to start a sentence. 'truly' doesn't make sense in this context because it's not an adjective

I guess this is not a true and a frontman is right.

I didn't really understand what this sentence was saying

These people had a choice: countinue the games or nodon't.

not should have 'do' in front of it which can contract to don't to sound more familiar

So, anyway the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

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Grammatically there are errors but I could still understand more or less the meaning of the sentence so that was ok. I think what is more important for you to focus on is the coherence of what you are writing. I didn't really follow the reasoning for why you didn't think it was a sad ending. Your argument wasn't clear. I think you'll improve a lot if you focus on this.

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skeshech

July 1, 2025

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Thank you!!

Today, I read all your corrections and wrote out two the most important things.

There should be a comma here

First is a English sentence structure, and second is articles.

1. The word “a” is not needed here
2. There should also be a comma after “sentence structure”

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game.

Howand how the director said: the show will get a sad ending.

1. It sounds better to connect these two sentences
2. A colon is being used incorrectly and should not be here
3. The word “director” should have the article “the” in front of it

But I don't think so, sinsce a first season I have thoughts about it.

Spelling error

This show is trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to dgo something overstepto far.

I’m not sure what you mean by “overstep”. Maybe you mean “going to far”? I’m not sure

And the main character trying to save everybody andis proof that he was right and his faith in people is trulyjustified.

1. “And” is used incorrectly here. You should use “is” instead
2. “Truly” is also used incorrectly here. I think you were trying to say “justified”

I guess it’s not a true and a frontman is right.

These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.

So, anyway, the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

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Good job again, I think that article practice will help a bit as quite a few of your errors were relating to articles. Good luck with your studying! :)

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skeshech

July 1, 2025

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Thank you so much!

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PacificOcean

July 1, 2025

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Of course!

Eleventh Day of Intense Study

Today is the eleventh day of my little challenge: I'm going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two the most important things.

First is about the English sentence structure and the second is about articles.

I will study it all tomorrow.

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game.

How the director said: the show will get a sad ending.

But I don't think so, sinsce athe first season I have thoughts about it.

This show is trying to tell us that people can forgoet about a morality and nudge other people to do something overstepnot in their nature.

Modified it a bit, I've also watched it ahaha.

And the main character trying to save everybody andis proof that he was right and his faith in people is trulye.

I guess it's not a true and a fthe Frontman is right.

These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.

And they made this choice.

So, anyway the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

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skeshech

June 30, 2025

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Thank you!

Eleventh Day of Intense Study


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Today is the eleventh day of my little challenge: I'm going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two the most important things.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I read all your corrections and wrote out two the most important things.

There should be a comma here

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two thehe two most important things.

Today I read all your corrections and wrote out two of the most important things.

First is a English sentence structure and second is articles.


First is about the English sentence structure and the second is about articles.

First is a English sentence structure, and second is articles.

1. The word “a” is not needed here 2. There should also be a comma after “sentence structure”

First is an English sentence structure and second is articles.

Whenever 'a' is in front of a word that starts with a vowel it becomes 'an'

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will study it all tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But now I want to tell you about a new season of Squid Game.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How director said: the show will get a sad ending.


How the director said: the show will get a sad ending.

Howand how the director said: the show will get a sad ending.

1. It sounds better to connect these two sentences 2. A colon is being used incorrectly and should not be here 3. The word “director” should have the article “the” in front of it

HowThe director said: that "the show will gethave a sad ending".

'How director said' doesn't make sense. You could say 'How the director said "the show will have a sad ending" ...' but you would need to complete the sentence with a comment on what the director said otherwise its unfinished. For example you could say 'How the director said "the show will have a sad ending", I don't think it will'. A show can technically 'get' a sad ending but it's more natural to use the verb 'to have' in this context

But I don't think so, sinse a first season I have thoughts about it.


But I don't think so, sinsce athe first season I have thoughts about it.

But I don't think so, sinsce a first season I have thoughts about it.

Spelling error

But I don't think soit will, sinsce ain the first season I have thoughts about it., <fill in reason>

I joined 'But I don't think so' to the sentence above in the earlier comment and modified it to make it make sense. The second part of this sentence 'sinse a first season I have thoughts about it. ' doesn't make sense because it's unfinished. You could say 'since in the first season everyone was happy' but 'I have thoughts about it' is not a reason for why you think it won't have a sad ending so it doesn't really make sense.

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I guess is not a true and a frontman is right.


I guess it's not a true and a fthe Frontman is right.

I guess it’s not a true and a frontman is right.

I guess this is not a true and a frontman is right.

I didn't really understand what this sentence was saying

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These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.


These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.

These people had a choice: countinue the games or not.

These people had a choice: countinue the games or nodon't.

not should have 'do' in front of it which can contract to don't to sound more familiar

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And they made this choice.


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So, anyway the main character wouldn't saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)


So, anyway, the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

So, anyway the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

So, anyway the main character wouldn't have saved everyone, and it's not a sad ending for me :)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This show trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to do something overstep.


This show is trying to tell us that people can forgoet about a morality and nudge other people to do something overstepnot in their nature.

Modified it a bit, I've also watched it ahaha.

This show is trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to dgo something overstepto far.

I’m not sure what you mean by “overstep”. Maybe you mean “going to far”? I’m not sure

This show is trying to tell us that people can forgoet about atheir morality and nudge other people to do something overstepignore their own as well.

I presume 'something overstep' you were trying to express that people can forget their morality and therefore influence others to forget their own morality as well.

This show trying to tell us that people can forgot about a morality and nudge other people to do something oversteputrageous.

"overstep" just doesn't fit here, but "outrageous" flows with your ideas of doing something that is unexpected and often time unethical

And the main character trying to save everybody and proof that he was right and his faith in people is truly.


And the main character trying to save everybody andis proof that he was right and his faith in people is trulye.

And the main character trying to save everybody andis proof that he was right and his faith in people is trulyjustified.

1. “And” is used incorrectly here. You should use “is” instead 2. “Truly” is also used incorrectly here. I think you were trying to say “justified”

And tThe main character trying to save everybody andwas proof that he was right and his faith in people is strulyong.

'And' cannot be used to start a sentence. 'truly' doesn't make sense in this context because it's not an adjective

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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