June 21, 2023
Electricity Short Circuit
In the past week, there was an issue with the electricity in one area of my house that frequently caused short circuits, which frustrated me a lot. It is a common sense that safety is paramount when dealing with such situations. Although I am not a professional electrician, however, I have undergone professional training in this field and obtained a working license. Therefore, I carefully investigated the matter myself.
Eventually, I discovered that these short circuits were caused by a shorted hot wire and a neutral wire in the garden due to the incessant rain. I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden, then resolved the problem within the house. Once the rain stopped for a while, I will deal with the electrical issue in the garden.
Electricityal Short Circuit
このの方が自然だと思います。それに、「Short Circuit」でもいいです。
In the past week, there whas been an issue with the electricity in one area of my house that frequently caused short circuits,(,) which frustrated me a lot.
It is a common sense that safety is paramount when dealing with such situations.
「Common Sense」というのは、日本語で言うと「常識」に当たります。抽象的な言葉は「uncountable noun」という言葉です。
そうですね。
Although I am not a professional electrician, however, I have undergone professional training in this field and obtained a working license.
わー、よかったですね。
「Although」と「however」が同じ意味ですから、同時に使わない方がいいです。
Therefore, I carefully investigated the matter myself.
Eventually, I discovered that these short circuits were caused by a shorted hot wire and a neutral wire in the garden which were exposed due to the incessant rain.
I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden, and thenis resolved the problem within the house.
おめでとうございます！
Once the rain stoppeds for a while, I will deal with the electrical issue in the garden.
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June 25, 2023
感謝しています！：ー）
Electricity Short Circuit
InDuring the past week, there was an issue with the electricity in one area of my house that frequently caused short circuits, which frustrated me a lot.
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Therefore, I carefully investigated the matter myself.
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June 22, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
Electricityal Short Circuit
It is a common sense that safety is paramount when dealing with such situations.
Although I am not a professional electrician, however, I haved undergone professional training in this field and obtained a working license.
Once the rain stoppeds for a while, I will deal with the electrical issue in the garden.
June 22, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
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Electricity Short Circuit Electric This sentence has been marked as perfect! Electric このの方が自然だと思います。それに、「Short Circuit」でもいいです。 |
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In the past week, there was an issue with the electricity in one area of my house that frequently caused short circuits, which frustrated me a lot.
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It is a common sense that safety is paramount when dealing with such situations. It is It is It is 「Common Sense」というのは、日本語で言うと「常識」に当たります。抽象的な言葉は「uncountable noun」という言葉です。 そうですね。 |
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Although I am not a professional electrician, however, I have undergone professional training in this field and obtained a working license. Although I am not a professional electrician, Although I am not a professional electrician, Although I am not a professional electrician, わー、よかったですね。 「Although」と「however」が同じ意味ですから、同時に使わない方がいいです。 |
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Therefore, I carefully investigated the matter myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Eventually, I discovered that these short circuits were caused by a shorted hot wire and a neutral wire in the garden due to the incessant rain.
Eventually, I discovered that these short circuits were caused by a shorted hot wire and a neutral wire in the garden which were exposed due to the incessant rain. |
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I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden, then resolved the problem within the house. I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden おめでとうございます！ |
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Once the rain stopped for a while, I will deal with the electrical issue in the garden. Once the rain stop Once the rain Once the rain stop |
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