Feb. 2, 2023
Elections in China
Before electing the next president, elections start gradually from the lowest government to the top government. Not all citizens can vote.
The government elects representatives who can vote for the next president. All representatives should be members of the China communist party because China's communist party is the leading party in China.
The lowest government is the township government, so township level representatives should be elected first. The second step is that township representatives elect county level representatives. Then in this way, from lower to top, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives, the national representatives. National representatives have the right to elect the next president.
In the last present election, there were 2379 national representatives. They were officials at different levels of government, and other successful people in different fields.
Of course, all those representatives voted for it at the Great Hall of People of China on the 22nd of October last year, 2022.
Before electing the next president, elections start gradually from the lowest government to the top government.
You can omit the second use of the word 'government' because the reader can infer you are still talking about it. This is just a style recommendation. Your usage is still correct but it sounds more natural and less redundant to omit the second one.
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Keep up the great work! Your writing already sounds very natural and you're well on your way to sound like a native English writer. :)
Feb. 4, 2023
谢谢你的鼓励，我会继续努力！
Elections in China
Before electing the next president, elections start gradually fromare held at the lowest level of government to the top government.first, slowly progressing to the highest level.
我如果要写这个句子的话应该说Elections in China are held starting at the lowest level of government, moving to the highest, including the president. 但是我并不想过分修改哈哈．
Not allOnly certain citizens can vote for the president.
Not all 就意味着大部分公民可以投票，only certain相对具体/restrictive
The government elects representatives who can vote for the next president.
All representatives shouldmust be members of the Chinaese communist party because China's communist party is the leading party in China.
你如果想用正式一点说法可以说Communist Party of China, that's the official English name.
The lowest level of government is the township government, so township level representatives shouldmust be elected first.
Then, in this way, from lowerbottom to top, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives, and finally the national representatives are elected.
National representatives have the right to elect the next president.
In the last present election, there were 2379 national representatives.
They werinclude officials at different levels of government, and other successful people in different fields.
如果你想说他们不再是officials at different levels of government，可以添加一个"former" (include former officials)
Of course, all those representatives voted for itin the presidential election at the Great Hall of the People of China on the 22nd of October last year, 2022.
我查到了英文名字好像是Great Hall of the People.
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Nice job! 我好奇你觉得中国的投票体系怎么样？我们这里（美国）也有indirect election of the president．我而且知道好多美国人对中国的政治系统的印象并不太好．．．其实是一个很惨的看法
Feb. 3, 2023
They werinclude officials at different levels of government, and other successful people in different fields.
No. The majority of them are officials still on stage.
Feb. 3, 2023
可以说基本上就是走个形式，之前都是内定好的。我也只能说这么多了，谢谢你的修改。
Feb. 3, 2023
可以说基本上就是走个形式，之前都是内定好的。我也只能说这么多了，谢谢你的修改。
没事明白了，谢谢你的回答 :)
Elections in China
Before electing the next president, elections start gradually from the lowest level of government to the tophighest level of government.
Not all citizens can vote.
The government elects representatives who can vote for the next president.
All representatives should be members of the Chinaese communist party because China's communist party is the leading party in China.
The lowest government is the township government, so township level representatives should be elected first.
The second step is that township representatives elect county level representatives.
ThenIt continues in this way, from lowerbottom to top, to the prefecture-level city representatives, then to the provincial representatives, and finally to the national representatives.
National representatives have the right to elect the next president.
In the last present election, there were 2379 national representatives.
They were officials at different levels of government, and other successful people in different fields.
Of course, all those representatives voted for it at the Great Hall of People of China on the 22nd of October last year, 2022.
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Interesting!
Feb. 2, 2023
Thank you very much!
Elections in China
Before electing the next president, elections start gradually from the lowest tier of government to the top government.
Not all citizens can vote.
The government elects representatives who can vote for the next president.
All representatives should be members of the China c's Communist pParty because China's cCommunist pParty is the leading party in China.
The lowest tier of government is the township government, so township level representatives should bare elected first.
The secondnext step is thatwhen township representatives elect county level representatives.
Then in this way, from lower to top, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives, the national representatives.
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NThen in this way, from lowest to highest, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives, and the national representatives have the right to elect the next president.
In the last presidential election, there were 2379 national representatives.
They were officials atfrom different levels of government, and other successful people in different fields.
Of course, all those representatives voted for it at the Great Hall of the People of China on the 22nd of October last year, 2022.
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Very interesting. I didn't know this. Good work!
Feb. 2, 2023
NThen in this way, from lowest to highest, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives, and the national representatives have the right to elect the next president.
I am not sure if you are saying "only national representatives who have the right to vote for the president in person (or directly)". if you are not, the statements are not the original statements meant.
Feb. 2, 2023
Of course, all those representatives voted for it at the Great Hall of the People of China on the 22nd of October last year, 2022.
The representatives all voted for Xi Jinping.
Feb. 2, 2023
oh, I see. Then the correction should be, "Of course, all those representatives voted for him at the Great Hall of the People of China on the 22nd of October last year."
Thank you very much!
Feb. 3, 2023
The representatives all voted for Xi Jinping.
oh, I see. Then the correction should be, "Of course, all those representatives voted for him at the Great Hall of the People of China on the 22nd of October last year."
Feb. 3, 2023
I am not sure if you are saying "only national representatives who have the right to vote for the president in person (or directly)". if you are not, the statements are not the original statements meant.
I see now. Then the correction should be, "Then in this way, from lowest to highest, the prefecture-level city representatives, the provincial representatives vote but only the national representatives have the right to elect the next president."
Feb. 3, 2023
Thank you.
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