Nov. 20, 2020
Journal 11/20/20
This is not my village, but it is very close to my village, and I think it can stand for my village, because the villages in this area are all the same. Many many years ago, I was born here, and raised here before I turned fifteen. Everything is different from the past, but it seems that everything is the same as the past: land is still that land, and I am still me. All the difference are only time.
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Journal 11/20/20
This village is not my village, but it isits very close to my village, and I thinkbelieve it can stand for my villagebe a suitable substitute for it, because all the villages in this area are all the same.
This village is not my village, but it sits very close to my village, and I believe it can be a suitable substitute for it, because all the villages in this area are all the same.
Many many years ago, I was born here, and raised here before I turned fifteen.
Many many years ago, I was born and raised here before I turned fifteen.
Everything, now, is different from the past, but somehow, at the same time, it seems that everything is just the same as the past:before: this land is still thatis land, and I am still me.
Everything, now, is different from the past but somehow, at the same time, it seems that everything is just the same as before: this land is still this land, and I am still me.
All theThe only difference are onlyis the passage of time.
The only difference is the passage of time.
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Nice sentiments in your piece! Good luck with it!
Nov. 21, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and comments.
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This is not my village, but it is very close to my village, and I think it can stand for my village, because villages in this area are all the same. |
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Many many years ago, I was born here, and raised here before I turned fifteen.
Many many years ago, I was born |
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Everything is different from the past, but it seems that everything is the same as the past: land is still that land, and I am still me.
Everything, now, is different from the past |
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All the changes are only the time. |
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This is not my village, but it is very close to my village, and I think it can stand for my village, because the villages in this area are all the same.
This village is not my village, but it |
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All the difference are only time.
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