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Oct. 25, 2020

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Ekiden

Ekiden is one of the relay styles that a few runners run a certain distance. Each runner runs about 20km, and he/she passes a sash to the next runner. Ekiden is popular in Japan, and the most famous convention is Hakone Ekiden, which is held on January first and second every year. Only 20 universities can join this rally. The total distance is 216km, then one team has 10 players. There is a mountain or windy area, so coaches determine which runner runs which area. The strategies are also important.
Today, there was a female ekiden in my city. It was restricted to stay by the road and yell&cheer up, I could watch a bit. The roads are regulated and police officers directed cars. Runners were led by police cars, it was so cool. I want to start running because I was inspired.

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Ekiden is one of the relay styles thatwhere a few runners run a certain distance.

Each runner runs about 20km, and then he/she passes a sash to the next runner.

Ekiden is popular in Japan, and the most famous convention is Hakone Ekiden, which is held on January first and second every year.

Only 20 universities can join this rallyce.

The total distance is 216km, then oneand each team has 10 players.

There is either a mountainous or windy area, so the coaches determine which runner runs which area.

The sStrategies arezing is also important.

Today, there was a femalewomen's ekiden in my city.

It wasYou were restricted to staying by the road and yell&cheer up,ing and cheering them on, but I could watch a bit.

The roads are regulated andby police officers, who directed cars.

Runners were led by police cars, it was so cool.

I want to start running because I was inspired.

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ponta

Oct. 26, 2020

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Thank you so much!

Ekiden

Ekiden is ona style of the relay styles that awhere few runners run a certain distance.

Each runner runs about 20km, and the/n he or she passes a sash to the next runner.

Ekiden is popular in Japan, and the most famous convention is Hakone Ekiden, which is held on January first and second every year.

Only 20 universities can join this rallelay.

The total distance is 216km, thenand one team has 10 players.

There is a course contains mountain orous and windy areas, so coaches determine which runner runs which area.

The sStrategies arey is also important.

Today, there was a female ekiden in my city.

It was restricted to stay by the road and yell& and cheer up, I could watch a bit.

The roads are regulated andby police officers directedin cars.

Runners were led by police cars, it was so cool.

I want to start running because I was inspired.

ponta's avatar
ponta

Oct. 26, 2020

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Thank you!

Ekiden


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Ekiden is one of the relay styles that a few runners run a certain distance.


Ekiden is ona style of the relay styles that awhere few runners run a certain distance.

Ekiden is one of the relay styles thatwhere a few runners run a certain distance.

Each runner runs about 20km, and he/she passes a sash to the next runner.


Each runner runs about 20km, and the/n he or she passes a sash to the next runner.

Each runner runs about 20km, and then he/she passes a sash to the next runner.

Ekiden is popular in Japan, and the most famous convention is Hakone Ekiden, which is held on January first and second every year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Only 20 universities can join this rally.


Only 20 universities can join this rallelay.

Only 20 universities can join this rallyce.

The total distance is 216km, then one team has 10 players.


The total distance is 216km, thenand one team has 10 players.

The total distance is 216km, then oneand each team has 10 players.

There is a mountain or windy area, so coaches determine which runner runs which area.


There is a course contains mountain orous and windy areas, so coaches determine which runner runs which area.

There is either a mountainous or windy area, so the coaches determine which runner runs which area.

The strategies are also important.


The sStrategies arey is also important.

The sStrategies arezing is also important.

Today, there was a female ekiden in my city.


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Today, there was a femalewomen's ekiden in my city.

It was restricted to stay by the road and yell&cheer up, I could watch a bit.


It was restricted to stay by the road and yell& and cheer up, I could watch a bit.

It wasYou were restricted to staying by the road and yell&cheer up,ing and cheering them on, but I could watch a bit.

The roads are regulated and police officers directed cars.


The roads are regulated andby police officers directedin cars.

The roads are regulated andby police officers, who directed cars.

Runners were led by police cars, it was so cool.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to start running because I was inspired.


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