Almost 10 years ago I joinattended a friend’s party. Almost 10 years ago I attended a friend’s party.

Joined implies you joined and thats all, if you went along to the party and stayed a while, it would be better to say I went to the party or I attended the party

So, I played with her daughter and the other kids. So, I played with her daughter and the other kids.

So, I played with her daughter and other kids. So I played with her daughter and other kids.

There's no need for a comma after 'so'

It wasThey are fun memories. They are fun memories.

It was fun, or They are fun memories

It was fun memories. It was fun memories.

'I made fun memories' would be more correct

I meet this friend a few days ago andt her work place. I met this friend a few days ago at her work place.

I meet this friend few days ago andt her work place. I met this friend few days ago at her work place.

When I shoulwed my ID card to her. When I showed my ID card to her.

When I shoulwed my ID card to her. When I showed my ID card to her.

She laughed aloud. She laughed aloud.

She laughed loudly. She laughed loudly.

'laughed' is a verb so you need an adverb

Because mMy birth day is same as her daughter's. My birthday is same as her daughter's.

Because my birth day is the same as her daughter. Because my birthday is the same as her daughter.

She said n" No wonder why at that date hertime, my daughter liked to play with meyou so much". She said " No wonder at that time, my daughter liked to play with you so much".

if you want to report speech you need the "" and report what she said. if its not a quote you might say She commented that ...

She said no wonder why at that date her daughter liked to play with me so much. She said no wonder why at that date her daughter liked to play with me so much.

The meaning is a little unclear here - maybe She said, "No wonder why my daughter liked playing with you so much at that party."