Oct. 28, 2022
Bizarre Existence
There are many memorable characters in Kabutoborg.
Manson is one of the most memorable characters.
His personality is not crazy, but his existence is.
He is a middle-aged guy with an afro.
He only appears in a single episode, but in the episode, he is depicted as a crew of the main characters, as if he has been friends with them for a long time.
He is not even mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers definitely get confused.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and he is in them somehow.
Another weird thing is that he is a professional pianist.
Check out a related video in the Notes section.
カブトボーグを代表する人気キャラ・マンソン君とは!?
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He is not even mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers definitely get confused.
He is not mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers get confused.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and somehow, he is in them somehow.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and somehow, he is in them.
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I have made some minor stylistic changes to make your writing sound more natural.
Oct. 30, 2022
Thank you for your correction, Ved!
Bizarre Existence
There are many memorable characters in Kabutoborg.
Manson is one of the most memorable characters.
Manson is one of the most memorable.
Your sentence is correct but this is more often how'd we say it in the US.
His personality is not crazy, but his existence is.
He is a middle-aged guy with an afro.
He only appears in a single episode, but in the episode, he is depicted as a crewpart of the crew of main characters, as if he has been friends with them for a long time.
He only appears in a single episode, but in the episode, he is depicted as part of the crew of main characters, as if he has been friends with them for a long time.
He is notever even mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers definitely get confused.
He is never even mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers definitely get confused.
or, even more natural in the US:
He is never mentioned at all in other episodes, so viewers definitely get confused.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and he is in them somehow.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes and he is in them somehow.
Another weird thing is that he is a professional pianist.
Check out a related video in the Notes section.
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面白そうな神秘ですね。よく出来ました！
Oct. 30, 2022
Thank you always for correcting!
Yep, his ecistence is interesting.
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There are many memorable characters in Kabutoborg. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Manson is one of the most memorable characters.
Manson is one of the most memorable Your sentence is correct but this is more often how'd we say it in the US. |
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His personality is not crazy, but his existence is. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is a middle-aged guy with an afro. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He only appears in a single episode, but in the episode, he is depicted as a crew of the main characters, as if he has been friends with them for a long time.
He only appears in a single episode, but in the episode, he is depicted as |
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He is not even mentioned in other episodes at all, so viewers definitely get confused.
He is n or, even more natural in the US: He is never mentioned at all in other episodes, so viewers definitely get confused.
He is not |
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The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and he is in them somehow.
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes
The episode shows some flashback images from previous episodes, and somehow, he is in them |
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Another weird thing is that he is a professional pianist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Check out a related video in the Notes section. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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