Dec. 8, 2024
商城
今天我和家人一起去了商城。我买了零食，妹妹买了一件毛衣。我喜欢商城，因为哪里有很多事情可做，比如剧院，餐馆和拱廊。我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服，但她说那是她的钱。下次我逛商城，我要买做饭用的刀。
Today I went to the mall with my family. I bought snacks and my sister bought a sweater. I like the mall because there is so much to do there, like theatres, restaurants and arcades. I think my sister bought too many clothes but she said it was her money. Next time I go to the mall, I will buy a knife for cooking.
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商城
今天我和家人一起去了商城。
我买了零食，妹妹买了一件毛衣。
我喜欢商城，因为哪那里有很多事情可做有趣的地方，比如剧院，、餐馆和拱廊。
我喜欢商城，因为那里有很多有趣的地方，比如剧院、餐馆和拱廊。
1、我小时候分辨“哪”和“那”的方法：“哪”有口字旁，所以用在提问的句子里。
2、“很多事情可做”的话，“比如”后边应该跟可做的事嘛。
我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服，但她说那是她的钱。
下次我逛商城，我要买做饭用的刀。
下次逛商城，我要买做饭用的刀。
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不错哦，加油！
Dec. 9, 2024
谢谢！
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我喜欢商城，因为哪里有很多事情可做，比如剧院，餐馆和拱廊。
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我喜欢商城，因为 1、我小时候分辨“哪”和“那”的方法：“哪”有口字旁，所以用在提问的句子里。 2、“很多事情可做”的话，“比如”后边应该跟可做的事嘛。 |
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我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服，但她说那是她的钱。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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