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EIKEN Pre-1 Writing Practice
Agree or disagree : Big companies have a positive effect on society.
Use 2 words below.
・Products
・The company
・The environment
・Work-life balance
P.S.
I can't write the convincing sentences. How can I improve it??
I think that big companies have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, pople tend to use their products because they are reliable and make good things. Good products make people's life better and comfortable. This is related to have a positive effect on society.
Second, employees in big companies must work in the good environment. They are considering how to make our life better. Therefore, they will give us some good effect to us.
In my conclusion, I think big companies have a positive effect on society.
EIKEN Pre-1 Writing Practice
How can I improve it??
1) You can provide examples for each of your reasons e.g. name one product from a big company that people use (For example, this product from this company…/Additionally, this product from this company…) and say how it makes people’s lives better (This product is useful because…/People want to buy this product from this company because…)
For your second reason, what kind of good effects can they have? Give some examples.
2) Add another short sentence to your conclusion summarising your two reasons
Feedback
I think that big companies have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, people tend to use the products of big companies because they are reliable and make good things. Good products make people's lives better and more comfortable. This ultimately has a positive effect on society.
Second, employees in big companies must work in a good environment. They are considering how to make our lives better. Therefore, they will have some good effect on us.
In conclusion, I think big companies have a positive effect on society.
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EIKEN Pre-1 Writing Practice EIKEN Pre-1 Writing Practice |
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Agree or disagree : Big companies have a positive effect on society. |
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Use 2 words below. |
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・Products |
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・The company |
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・The environment |
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・Work-life balance |
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P.S. |
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I can't write the convincing sentences. |
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How can I improve it?? How can I improve it?? 1) You can provide examples for each of your reasons e.g. name one product from a big company that people use (For example, this product from this company…/Additionally, this product from this company…) and say how it makes people’s lives better (This product is useful because…/People want to buy this product from this company because…) For your second reason, what kind of good effects can they have? Give some examples. 2) Add another short sentence to your conclusion summarising your two reasons |
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