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homini

Jan. 3, 2022

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Ha-min has been ill these days and so have I. Perhaps she had infected me. She started crying for help, and when my 9 month-old-daughter's cooing finally turned from "mumumumum" to "momommommy", I bursted into tears for no reason. She's too vulnerable to survive on her own without being taken care of by someone. She didn't choose me to be her mother, but I did when I decided to start a family. I might not be able to be the perfect mother, but hearing her word "mommy", I promised that I will try my best to be the one for her.

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Ha-min has been ill these days and so have I.

Perhaps she had infected me.

She started crying for help, and when my 9 month-old-daughter's cooing finally turned from "mumumumum" to "momommommy", I bursted into tears for no reason.

She's too vulnerable to survive on her own without being taken care of by someone.

She didn't choose me to be her mother, but I did when I decided to start a family.

I might not be able to be the perfect mother, but when I hearingd her say the word "mommy", I promised that I willould try my best to be the onebest mom for her.

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Nice :) Happy parenting!

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homini

Jan. 8, 2022

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Thank you so much 💓

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Ha-min has been ill these days and so have I.


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Perhaps she had infected me.


Perhaps she had infected me.

She started crying for help, and when my 9 month-old-daughter's cooing finally turned from "mumumumum" to "momommommy", I bursted into tears for no reason.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She's too vulnerable to survive on her own without being taken care of by someone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She didn't choose me to be her mother, but I did when I decided to start a family.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I might not be able to be the perfect mother, but hearing her word "mommy", I promised that I will try my best to be the one for her.


I might not be able to be the perfect mother, but when I hearingd her say the word "mommy", I promised that I willould try my best to be the onebest mom for her.

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