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My Favorite Russian Literature - Part 2

The first in the authors list will be Fyodor Dostoevsky. Many people heard of or read his novels "Crime and Punishment", "The Brothers Karamazov", "The Idiot" and others.
"The Idiot" was his first novel I read. Then I re-read it several times because of novel's characters. I think the most memorable for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of the phthisis. He writes a letter about how he feels being sentenced to death in such a young age.
In "The Brothers Karamazov" I like a chapter about a monk the most. It tells about a hussar who becomes a monk after he goes on a duel, and realizes how wrong it is being forced to kill a man. Then he meets a strange man, who is admired by his action, becomes his friend and reveals his terrible secret. In the end, the man tells truth about his crime in past to the citizens of a town, and tragically dies not being able to carry the aftermath of his deed.
And, lastly, there are several stories, which are rather good. I personally like "The Dream of a Ridiculous Man" and "Notes from Underground". The first is an inspiring story, about a man who wants to commit a suicide, but sees a dream that stops him from doing that, and direct him on the good path . The second one shows us a misery of a human-being. It tells about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions, but still making them, and rationalize them with his own dirty little logic.

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My Favorite Russian Literature - Part 2

I personally like "The Dream of a Ridiculous Man" and "Notes from Underground".

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In the end, the man tells truth about hisa crime in the past to the citizens of ahis town, and tragically dies not being able to carry the aftermathunable to suffer the consequences of his deed.

"Unable" sounds better than "not being able." I also find "carry/bear the consequences" too vague. I looked it up since i couldn't remember that subplot, and it sounds like the issue was not that he couldn't come to terms with it (which is what your sentence suggests) but that no one believed him.

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Many people have heard of or read his novels, such as "Crime and Punishment"," "The Brother's Karamazov"," "The Idiot," and others.

Adding "such as" makes the sentence/the transition into the list sound smoother.
If you are writing in American English, you put the commas inside of the quotations. I'm assuming you are writing in American English, since earlier you wrote "favorite" instead of "favourite" (which would be British English) :)
But if not, then you were originally correct.

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I think the most memorable part for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of the phthiuberculosis.

I actually had to google to see what "phthisis" meant! It is an extremely old word for what we call now "tuberculosis."

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My Favorite Russian Literature - Part 2


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The first in the authors list will be Fyodor Dostoevsky.


The first in my favorithe authors list willould be Fyodor Dostoevsky. The first in my favorite authors list would be Fyodor Dostoevsky.

The first in the list of my favorite authors list will be Fyodor Dostoevsky. The first in the list of my favorite authors will be Fyodor Dostoevsky.

Many people heard of or read his novels "Crime and Punishment", "The Brothers Karamazov", "The Idiot" and others.


Many people have heard of or read his novels, such as "Crime and Punishment"," "The Brother's Karamazov"," "The Idiot," and others. Many people have heard of or read his novels, such as "Crime and Punishment," "The Brother's Karamazov," "The Idiot," and others.

Adding "such as" makes the sentence/the transition into the list sound smoother. If you are writing in American English, you put the commas inside of the quotations. I'm assuming you are writing in American English, since earlier you wrote "favorite" instead of "favourite" (which would be British English) :) But if not, then you were originally correct.

Many people heard of or read his novels of his, such as "Crime and Punishment", "The Brothers Karamazov", "The Idiot" and others. Many people heard of or read novels of his, such as "Crime and Punishment", "The Brothers Karamazov", "The Idiot" and others.

"The Idiot" was his first novel I read.


"The Idiot" was his first novel that I read. "The Idiot" was his first novel that I read.

You can also say: "The Idiot" was the first novel of his that I read.

"The Idiot" was his first novel of his I read. "The Idiot" was first novel of his I read.

"The Idiot" was histhe first novel of his that I read. "The Idiot" was the first novel of his that I read.

Then I re-read it several times because of novel's characters.


Then, I re-read it several times because of the novel's characters. Then, I re-read it several times because of the novel's characters.

"Then" is a transition word here, so you need a comma

Then I re-read it several times because of the novel's characters. Then I reread it several times because of the novel's characters.

I think the most memorable for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of the phthisis.


I think the most memorable part for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of the phthiuberculosis. I think the most memorable part for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of tuberculosis.

I actually had to google to see what "phthisis" meant! It is an extremely old word for what we call now "tuberculosis."

I think the most memorable part for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of the phthisis. I think the most memorable part for me is a chapter about Ippolit, a young man who is going to die of phthisis.

He writes a letter about how he feels being sentenced to death in such a young age.


He writes a letter about how he feels being sentenced to death inat such a young age. He writes a letter about how he feels being sentenced to death at such a young age.

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He writes a letter about how he feels like he's being sentenced to death inat such a young age. He writes a letter about how he feels like he's being sentenced to death at such a young age.

In "The Brothers Karamazov" I like a chapter about a monk the most.


In "The Brother's Karamazov," I like amy favorite chapter is about a monk the most. In "The Brother's Karamazov," my favorite chapter is about a monk.

In "The Brother's Karamazov," is a transition, so it needs a comma. Sounds better to say "my favorite chapter"

In "The Brothers Karamazov," I like a chapter about a monk the most. In "The Brothers Karamazov," I like a chapter about a monk the most.

It tells about a hussar who becomes a monk after he goes on a duel, and realizes how wrong it is being forced to kill a man.


It tellis about a hussar who becomes a monk after he goefights oin a duel, and realizes how wrong it is being forced to kill a man. It is about a hussar who becomes a monk after he fights in a duel, and realizes how wrong it is being forced to kill a man.

It tells about us a hussar who becomes a monk after he goes on a duel, and realizes how wrong it is beingto be forced to kill a man. It tells about us a hussar who becomes a monk after he goes on a duel and realizes how wrong it is to be forced to kill a man.

"Tell" in the sense more of "inform" than "recount a story" needs an object.

Then he meets a strange man, who is admired by his action, becomes his friend and reveals his terrible secret.


Then he, the monk meets a strange man, who is admired by his action,s. They becomes his friends and he reveals his terrible secret. Then, the monk meets a strange man, who is admired by his actions. They become friends and he reveals his terrible secret.

Then he meets a strange man, who is admired byfor his action,s. He becomes his friend and reveals hisa terrible secret. Then he meets a strange man who is admired for his actions. He becomes his friend and reveals a terrible secret.

In the end, the man tells truth about his crime in past to the citizens of a town, and tragically dies not being able to carry the aftermath of his deed.


In the end, the man tells truth about hisa crime inhe committed in the past to the citizens of a town, and as a result tragically dies after not being able to carry the aftermathhandle the consequences of his deed. In the end, the man tells truth about a crime he committed in the past to the citizens of a town, and as a result tragically dies after not being able to handle the consequences of his deed.

"aftermath" is a good word, but I changed it to "consequences" since I added "after" a bit before. I added "after" because it sounds better to put a timestamp in there.

In the end, the man tells truth about hisa crime in the past to the citizens of ahis town, and tragically dies not being able to carry the aftermathunable to suffer the consequences of his deed. In the end, the man tells truth about a crime in the past to the citizens of his town and tragically dies unable to suffer the consequences of his deed.

"Unable" sounds better than "not being able." I also find "carry/bear the consequences" too vague. I looked it up since i couldn't remember that subplot, and it sounds like the issue was not that he couldn't come to terms with it (which is what your sentence suggests) but that no one believed him.

And, lastly, there are several stories, which are rather good.


And, lastly, there are several stories, which that are rather good. And lastly, there are several stories that are rather good.

And, lastly, there are several shorter stories, which are rather good. And, lastly, there are several shorter stories which are rather good.

"Stories" without qualificiation in the context of literature suggests "short stories," but that doesn't fit "Notes from Underground," which is considered a novella.

I personally like "The Dream of a Ridiculous Man" and "Notes from Underground".


I personally like "The Dream of a Ridiculous Man" and "Notes from Underground"." I personally like "The Dream of a Ridiculous Man" and "Notes from Underground."

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The first is an inspiring story, about a man who wants to commit a suicide, but sees a dream that stops him from doing that, and direct him on the good path .


The first is an inspiring story, about a man who wants to commit a suicide, but sees a dream that stops him from doing that, and directs him on the good path . The first is an inspiring story about a man who wants to commit suicide, but sees a dream that stops him from doing that and directs him on the good path.

The first is an inspiring story, about a man who wants to commit a suicide, but seehas a dream that stops him from doing that, and directs him onto the good path . The first is an inspiring story, about a man who wants to commit suicide but has a dream that stops him from doing that and directs him onto the good path .

The second one shows us a misery of a human-being.


The second one shows us athe misery of a human-being. The second one shows us the misery of a human-being.

The second one shows us athe misery of a human-being. The second one shows us the misery of a human-being.

It tells about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions, but still making them, and rationalize them with his own dirty little logic.


It tellis about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions, but still making themnevertheless continues to act the same, and rationalize them with his own dirty, little logic. It is about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions, but nevertheless continues to act the same, and rationalize them with his own dirty, little logic.

I would use the word "tells" when someone is talking, not what a book/article/show etc. says

It tells about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions, but still makinges them, and rationalizeing them with his own dirty little logic. It tells about a man who understands the evil nature of his actions but still makes them, rationalizing them with his own dirty little logic.

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