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I introduce about Takenoko no sato.
This is so good taste.
Takenoko no sato covers chocolate on cookie.
This cookie's texture is moister than other cookie.
So Takenoko no sato is so good.
私が紹介するのはたけのこの里です
たけのこの里はすごく美味しくて
クッキーの上にチョコが覆いかぶさっているお菓子です。
このクッキーの食感が、他のクッキーよりもしっとりしています
だから、たけのこの里はすごく美味しいのです
I introducetalk about Takenoko no sato.
I talk about Takenoko no sato.
I'll talk about Takenoko no sato
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I'll introduce Takenoko no sato
ThisIt is so good taste.
It is so good
It is so good
OR
It has a good taste
Takenoko no sato covers chocolate on cookie.is a cookie covered with chocolate
Takenoko no sato is a cookie covered with chocolate
cookie first, then the covering
This cookie's texture is moister than other cookies. This cookie's texture is moister than other cookies.
plural
So, Takenoko no sato is so good. So, Takenoko no sato is so good.
aAbout my favorite snack
About my favorite snack
I introduce'll tell you about Takenoko no sato.
I'll tell you about Takenoko no sato.
This is soIt has a very good taste.
It has a very good taste.
Or: It tastes very good.
Takenoko no sato covers chocolate on cookiIt's a biscuit covered with chocolate.
It's a biscuit covered with chocolate.
"It's" can be "Takenoko no sato is" instead, but the repetition feels unnatural in English.
You can probably use "cookie", but I think "biscuit" describes it better. A cookie, to me, is usually bigger and has chocolate chips (チョコチップクッキー), or something similar in it. This will depend on where the person comes from, though (American English vs. British English).
This cookiebiscuit's texture is more moister than other cookiebiscuits.
This biscuit's texture is more moist than other biscuits.
I'm unsure if "moister" is a word, but if it is, it is almost never used.
So Takenoko no sato is so good. So Takenoko no sato is so good.
美味しい = Tasty, delicious
"Good" is also fine, though!
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They look like a very tasty snack!
aAbout my favorite snack
About my favorite snack
At the beginning of the sentence, the first letter of the first word begins with a capital letter.
I introduce aboutMy favourite snack is Takenoko no sato.
My favourite snack is Takenoko no sato.
This is a more natural way to say it, since you're talking about your favourite snack.
You can also say "The name of my favorite snack is Takenoko no sato".
This is so good taste.It is very delicious.
It is very delicious.
Your snack is not alive, so we use "it". If you want to describe your snack, we use "it" at the beginning of the sentence.
It is delicious.
It tastes like chocolate.
Something like that.
Takenoko no sato covers chocolate on cookiokie is coated with chocolate.
Takenoko no sato cookie is coated with chocolate.
This cookie's texture is moister than other cookie.s.
This cookie's texture is moister than other cookies.
SoThat's why Takenoko no sato is so good.
That's why Takenoko no sato is so good.
Or That's why Takenoko no sato tastes so good.
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about my favorite snack
At the beginning of the sentence, the first letter of the first word begins with a capital letter.
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I introduce about Takenoko no sato.
This is a more natural way to say it, since you're talking about your favourite snack. You can also say "The name of my favorite snack is Takenoko no sato".
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I I'll talk about Takenoko no sato OR I'll introduce Takenoko no sato |
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This is so good taste.
Your snack is not alive, so we use "it". If you want to describe your snack, we use "it" at the beginning of the sentence. It is delicious. It tastes like chocolate. Something like that.
Or: It tastes very good.
It is so good OR It has a good taste |
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Takenoko no sato covers chocolate on cookie.
Takenoko no sato co
"It's" can be "Takenoko no sato is" instead, but the repetition feels unnatural in English. You can probably use "cookie", but I think "biscuit" describes it better. A cookie, to me, is usually bigger and has chocolate chips (チョコチップクッキー), or something similar in it. This will depend on where the person comes from, though (American English vs. British English).
Takenoko no sato cookie first, then the covering |
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This cookie's texture is moister than other cookie.
This cookie's texture is moister than other cookie
This I'm unsure if "moister" is a word, but if it is, it is almost never used. This cookie's texture is moister than other cookies. This cookie's texture is moister than other cookies. plural |
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So Takenoko no sato is so good.
Or That's why Takenoko no sato tastes so good. So Takenoko no sato is so good. So Takenoko no sato is so good. 美味しい = Tasty, delicious "Good" is also fine, though! So, Takenoko no sato is so good. So, Takenoko no sato is so good. |
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