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Favorite season

I'm going to talk about my favorite season. I love winter the best of all seasons. Of course, I like summer too, but I like winter better than summer. That's because if it's cold, I can put on a lot of clothes and put up with it, but if it's hot, I can't take off all my clothes. Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air, and we have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter. However, there is one thing I don't like about winter. If I'm wearing warmly, I'll sweat when I get on train or walk into shop where the heater works. I love winter though.

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I'm going to talk about my favorite season.

Of course, I like summer too, but I like winter better than summer.

That's because if it's cold, I can put on a lot of clothes and put up with it, but if it's hot, I can't take off all my clothes.

However, there is one thing I don't like about winter.

I love winter though.

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July 7, 2020

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I'm going to talk about my favorite season.

However, there is one thing I don't like about winter.

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Favorite season


Favorite sSeason Favorite Season

In English, we capitalize a large portion of the title. Here is a link to a website with some rules as to whether or not a word in the title needs to be capital or lowercase: https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/capitalization/rules-for-capitalization-in-titles.html

I'm going to talk about my favorite season.


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I love winter the best of all seasons.


I love winter the best of all seasonsOut of all of the seasons, I love winter the most. Out of all of the seasons, I love winter the most.

I love winter the besmost out of all seasons. I love winter the most out of all seasons.

We use "most" to talk about highest level of feeling. "most out of" is one way to express comparison. Example, "I like him the most out of all my friends".

Of course, I like summer too, but I like winter better than summer.


Of course, I like summer too, but I like winter better than summermore. Of course, I like summer, but I like winter more.

This makes the sentence slightly less redundant when omitting the second "summer".

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That's because if it's cold, I can put on a lot of clothes and put up with it, but if it's hot, I can't take off all my clothes.


That's because if it's cold, I can put on a lot of clothes and put up with it, but if it's cold outside. However, if it's hot, I can't take off all my clothes. That's because I can put on a lot of clothes and put up with it if it's cold outside. However, if it's hot, I can't take off all my clothes.

This was just a long sentence. For me, it reads a little better when split into two, but I think that's personal preference.

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Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air, and we have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter.


Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air, and w. We have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter. Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air. We have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter.

Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air, and w. We have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter. Furthermore, I like the cool and crisp air. We have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter.

One thing to be careful for is when we use a coordinating conjunction such as "and", the clause after has to link with the one before by having equal importance, otherwise it becomes a run on sentence. "we have many big events like Christmas and New Year's Day in winter" does not relate to the clause "I like the cool and crisp air", which is why we start a new sentence.

However, there is one thing I don't like about winter.


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If I'm wearing warmly, I'll sweat when I get on train or walk into shop where the heater works.


If I'm wearing warmly clothes, I'll sweat when I get on train or walk into shops where there is a heater works. If I'm wearing warm clothes, I'll sweat when I get on train or walk into shops where there is a heater.

If I'm weardressing warmly, I'll sweat when I get on the train or walk into a shop where the heater worksis on. If I'm dressing warmly, I'll sweat when I get on the train or walk into a shop where the heater is on.

the phrase is "dress warm" or "dress warmly" when wearing a lot of clothes for the cold. "the train" We are actually not being specific, but for activities, "the" is used. Example would be "I'm going to the store." "a" shop, because in this case we are not being specific as to which shop. "on" is used to describe a device that is operating. In this case it is a heater.

I love winter though.


I love winter though.

Although I wouldn't consider this sentence incorrect, it's used a bit more in spoken language than in written language. To connect it better to the previous sentence and overall paragraph, I would maybe recommend; "Nevertheless, winter is still my favorite season."

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