April 8, 2023
Education
Would you prefer to learn at home rather than to go to school? Why?
I'd prefer to learn at home to go to school. I used to go to university by bus, so I had to get up rather early in order to have time to have breakfast, get dressed, and get to the bus station on time. Moreover, the university was nearly fifty minutes away from the bus station, so I also got home too late. For this reason, I didn't have enough time to do homeworks and much less to unwind. I didn't sleep well these days that even I couldn't focus in class either, so my academic performance ended up decreasing.
When it comes to learning at home, I don't have those problems. To begin with, I don't waste endless hours of time going from your home to university. Having more time, I can also study better for my exams. Then, I feel less exhausted and overwhelmed as I can programme my time more efficiently. Of course, studying at home has its problems. For example, you are more likely to get distracted by your computer or mobile phone than in class. Plus, if you want to study at home, you must have a computer and access to the internet. This means that only the families that are able to afford to pay for internet can study at home.
In conclusión, I view positively learning at home and I believe that it is an interesting issue that institutions must discuss, and consider how to integrate it with the current academic system in order to have a more inclusive education.
Education
Would you prefer to learn at home rather than to go to school?
Why?
I'd prefer to learn at home than to go to school.
I used to go to university by bus, so I had to get up rather early in order to have time to have breakfast, get dressed, and get to the bus station on time.
Moreover, the university was nearly fifty minutes away from the bus station, so I also got home too late.
For this reason, I didn't have enough time to do homeworks and or much less to unwind.
I don't think homework has a different plural form. I always just say homework even if I have multiple assignments.
I didn't sleep well these days that even. I couldn't focus in class either, so my academic performance ended up decreasing.
Either "I haven't sleep well these days." or "I didn't sleep well." I think for stylistic reasons, "I didn't sleep well," is better since it matches the rest of the text.
I tried to think of a connector for the next part of the sentence, but I think it just sounds a lot better without one. But you can maybe say "So little that I couldn't focus in class either."
When it comes to learning at home, I don't have those problems.
To begin with, I don't waste endless hours of time going from myour home to university.
Having more time, I can also study better for my exams.
Then, I feel less exhausted and overwhelmed as I can programmschedule my time more efficiently.
Using program as a verb is really only for robots and computers. You can program a clock to wake you up in the morning, but you would schedule somebody else to wake you up.
Of course, studying at home has its problems.
For example, you are more likely to get distracted by your computer or mobile phone than in class.
Plus, if you want to study at home, you must have a computer and access to the internet.
This means that only the families that are able to afford to pay for internet can study at home.
In conclusióon, I view positively learning at home positively, and I believe that it is an interesting issue that institutions must discuss, and consider how to integrate it with the current academic system in order to have a more inclusive education.
"I positively view learning at home" might also work
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Great job, the last sentence is especially well written!
April 8, 2023
Thank you very much for your corrections and suggestions! They are very helpful :DD
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Education This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Would you prefer to learn at home rather than to go to school? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd prefer learning at home to going to school. |
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I used to go to university by bus, so I had to get up rather early in order to have time to have breakfast, get dressed, and get to the bus station on time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, the university was nearly fifty minutes away from the bus station, so I also got home too late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For this reason, I didn't have enough time to do homeworks and much less to unwind. For this reason, I didn't have enough time to do homework I don't think homework has a different plural form. I always just say homework even if I have multiple assignments. |
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I didn't sleep well these days that even I couldn't focus in class either, so my academic performance ended up decreasing. I didn't sleep well Either "I haven't sleep well these days." or "I didn't sleep well." I think for stylistic reasons, "I didn't sleep well," is better since it matches the rest of the text. I tried to think of a connector for the next part of the sentence, but I think it just sounds a lot better without one. But you can maybe say "So little that I couldn't focus in class either." |
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When it comes to learning at home, I don't have those problems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To begin with, I don't waste endless hours of time going from your home to university. To begin with, I don't waste endless hours of time going from my |
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Having more time, I can also study better for my exams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, I feel less exhausted and overwhelmed as I can programme my time more efficiently. Then, I feel less exhausted and overwhelmed as I can Using program as a verb is really only for robots and computers. You can program a clock to wake you up in the morning, but you would schedule somebody else to wake you up. |
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Of course, studying at home has its problems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, you are more likely to get distracted by your computer or mobile phone than in class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Plus, if you want to study at home, you must have a computer and access to the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This means that only the families that are able to afford to pay for internet can study at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusión, I view positively learning at home and I believe that it is an interesting issue that institutions must discuss, and consider how to integrate it with the current academic system in order to have a more inclusive education. In conclusi "I positively view learning at home" might also work |
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I'd prefer to learn at home to go to school. I'd prefer to learn at home than to go to school. |
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