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hebereke

April 29, 2020

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Education should be based on the goal to develop the ability to tell what you can do and what you cannot. What is important is to have reasonable confidence in what you can and proper humility to learn what you cannot. If only showing off capability let people go up the social ladder and get a higher position, the society would be shallow and hollow.


教育とは結局のところ、自分には何ができ、何ができないかを知る力を、各人の中に育てることを基本とするとふさわしいのではないかと私は思っています。できることについてはそれにふさわしい自信を持つこと、できないことについては謙虚になって学ぶことが大切です。自分にできることばかりを誇示することによって、その人が社会生活の上でも優位に立つような社会は、浅薄な社会であります。

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EThe goal of education should be based on the goal to develop theyour ability to telldetermine what you can do and what you cannot. do

What isThe important thing is to have a reasonable amount of confidence in what you can andthe things you can do, and the proper humility to learn what you cannot. do

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If people are only showing off what they are capable of in order to climb the social ladder, our society would be shallow and hollow

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hebereke

April 29, 2020

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thank you!!

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If only showing off capabilityThe society that let people go upclimb the social ladder and get a higher position, the by means of showing off their abilities, will be a society would bethat is shallow and hollow.

I think this is a more natural way of emphasizing how terrible this will be for society.
"climb the social ladder" is an idiomatic expression.
「によって」= "by means of"

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Good job! Sadly, people do quite often use education as a means to an end rather than seeing its intrinsic value.

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教育とは結局のところ、自分には何ができ、何ができないかを知る力を、各人の中に育てることを基本とするとふさわしいのではないかと私は思っています。できることについてはそれにふさわしい自信を持つこと、できないことについては謙虚になって学ぶことが大切です。自分にできることばかりを誇示することによって、その人が社会生活の上でも優位に立つような社会は、浅薄な社会であります。


Education should be based on the goal to develop the ability to tell what you can do and what you cannot.


EThe goal of education should be based on the goal to develop theyour ability to telldetermine what you can do and what you cannot. do

What is important is to have reasonable confidence in what you can and proper humility to learn what you cannot.


What isThe important thing is to have a reasonable amount of confidence in what you can andthe things you can do, and the proper humility to learn what you cannot. do

If only showing off capability let people go up the social ladder and get a higher position, the society would be shallow and hollow.


If only showing off capabilityThe society that let people go upclimb the social ladder and get a higher position, the by means of showing off their abilities, will be a society would bethat is shallow and hollow.

I think this is a more natural way of emphasizing how terrible this will be for society. "climb the social ladder" is an idiomatic expression. 「によって」= "by means of"

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