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InFrom 1980 to 1990, the workforce that was employed in partthe areas of finance, technology, and retail had a gradually increase; in 1990 to 2000, the technology and retail parteas experienced a slowly incline from approximately 6% to about 6.5%, and the partea of finance had sharply raised from about 7% to 14 %. From 1980 to 1990, the workforce that was employed in the areas of finance, technology, and retail had a gradually increase; in 1990 to 2000, the technology and retail areas experienced a slow incline from approximately 6% to about 6.5%, and the area of finance sharply raised from about 7% to 14%.

In 2000 to 2010, the part of retail area had constantly trend inof around 5%, the part of technologyical field saw a moderately increase from 6% to 10%, and finance had a slowlymall incline from 14% to 15%. In 2000 to 2010, the retail area had constant trend of around 5%, the technological field saw a moderate increase from 6% to 10%, and finance had a small incline from 14% to 15%.