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TarYosh

Nov. 29, 2022

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Eddy (Duolingo Character)

Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.
He works as a teacher in a high school.
Eddy often seeks a date in story lessons.
He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.
Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown on.
Junior's annoying personality is inherited from Eddy for sure.

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Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.

男の子は8歳だ = "The boy is 8 years old"
"_ is x years old" = predicative

8歳である男の子 = "an 8 year old boy"
"x year old _" = attributive

He works as a teacher in a high school.

Eddy often seeks a date in story lessons.

He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is whyso Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown upon.

Junior's annoying personality is inherited from Eddy for sure.

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Good job!

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TarYosh

Dec. 1, 2022

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Thank you very much, onediamondmorning!

Eddy (Duolingo Character)

Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.

In this sentence, ”8 year old" is used as an adjectival phrase to describe Junior. That's why we don't use the plural form of "year" here.

He works as a teacher in a high school.

Eddy often seeks a date in story lessons.

He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and so this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

ちょっと変なストーリーですね。

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown onupon him.

Junior's annoying personality is inherited from Eddy for sure.

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面白いですね。よく書けています。

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TarYosh

Dec. 1, 2022

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Thank you very much, mari-san! Yeah, he is annoying but also interesting.

Eddy (Duolingo Character)

Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old sonboy, Junior.

It feels redundant to say he is a father of a son.

He works as a teacher in a high school.

Eddy often seeks a dates in story lessons.

He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

😮

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown onside eye him.

Nuance:
side eye - they give him a bad look but don't say anything
frown upon - disapprove of, but don't necessarily actually make a facial expression

I'm not sure which one you meant so including as notes.

Junior's annoying personality is inherited from Eddy for sure.

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Eddy sounds like an unusual guy!

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TarYosh

Dec. 1, 2022

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Thank you very much, abcde! He is a weirdo, lol.

Eddy (Duolingo Character)


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Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.


Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old sonboy, Junior.

It feels redundant to say he is a father of a son.

Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.

In this sentence, ”8 year old" is used as an adjectival phrase to describe Junior. That's why we don't use the plural form of "year" here.

Eddy is a single father of an 8 years old son, Junior.

男の子は8歳だ = "The boy is 8 years old" "_ is x years old" = predicative 8歳である男の子 = "an 8 year old boy" "x year old _" = attributive

He works as a teacher in a high school.


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Eddy often seeks a date in story lessons.


Eddy often seeks a dates in story lessons.

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He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.


He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

😮

He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and so this is why Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

ちょっと変なストーリーですね。

He hides his leather pants and whip in his drawer, and this is whyso Junior thinks Eddy is a lion trainer.

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown on.


Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown onside eye him.

Nuance: side eye - they give him a bad look but don't say anything frown upon - disapprove of, but don't necessarily actually make a facial expression I'm not sure which one you meant so including as notes.

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown onupon him.

Sometimes he comes up with unrealistic ideas that make other characters frown upon.

Junior's annoying personality is inherited from Eddy for sure.


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