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The possible causes of this phenomenon and the solutions ofor it have drawn widespread attention.

It’s obvious that the causes of thatre are multiple causes.

The most important factor, however, is human behavior.

Since the Industrial Revolution, the world economy has increased rapidly for because of the development of science and technology.

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To name someExamples of devastating problems, include air pollution, water pollution, deforest destrucation and species disextinction.

In return, nature and the environment warn us bywith extreme weather conditions, such as heat waves, sandstorms, acid rain and global warming.

Firstly, from Tthe perspective of the government, it is crucial to make apprecopriate policies and plans for the balanced progress of economic development and the environmental protection.

For example, many conferences washave been held this year to reach consensus and to negotiate, so as to urge countries takingo take immediate actions to protect the environment.

Secondly, what individuals can do is increasinge their awareness of environmental protection and acting from the tiniest steps suchby implementing such things as water saving, waste sorting and takinguse of green and low-carbon transportation.

The power of a single person may be small, but multipley this by 7 billion, and it woruld make unparalleled changes.

As we all know, lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable asserts.

It is fundamentally important not only to people’s lives at present, but also to that of next generations thato protecting the environment while keeping high-speed economic development.

There are several reasons which result in such an unbalanced situation, w. We human beings must work together to recover the ecosystem and build a beautiful world.

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Damage is always singular (the storm caused great damage) unless it is in a legal context (he was awarded three million dollars in damages)

If you are using the phrase 'brought to' you need a noun or pronoun to complete the phrase. "I brought it [the cake] to the party"

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It’s obvious that the causes of thait are multiple.

It would be more natural to say 'there are multiple causes'

The most important factor, however, is human behavior.

Since the Industrial Revolution, the world economy has increased rapidly for due to the development of science and technology.

If you mean 'because of...' you can use 'due to' here. Charles was late for work due to oversleeping.

Therefore, even greater demand of lands and natural resources and the relentless pollutions almost destroyed the environment.

This sentence seems incomplete to me. Perhaps you could say: Therefore, this caused an even greater demand...

To nameIncluding some devastating problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, forest destruction and species distinction.

I think including works better here, as 'to name some...' only works well if the sentence will be expanded upon.

In return, nature and the environment warn us by extreme weathers, such as heat waves, sandstorms, acid rain and global warming.

Firstly, from Tthe perspective of the government, it is crucial to make apprecopriate policies and plans for the balanced progress of economic development and the environmental protection.

For example, many conferences washave been held this year to reach a consensus and negotiate, so as to urge countries takingo take immediate actions to protect the environment.

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Secondly, what individuals can do is to increasing the awareness of environmental protection and acting from the tiniest steps such as water saving, waste sorting and taking green and low-carbon transportation.

The power of a single person may be small, but multipleied by 7 billion, it woruld make unparalleled changes.

As we all know, lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable asserts.

It is fundamentally important not only to people’s lives at present, but also to that of the next generations, thato protecting the environment while keepmaintaining high-speed economic development.

There are several reasons which result in such an unbalanced situation,; we human beings must work together to recover the ecosystem and build a beautiful world.

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In this age of change, the society is facing rapid development of the economy, which is improvesing humans welfare and life standards.

Alternative: In this age of change, society is facing rapid economic development, which is improving human welfare and life standards.

Yet, at the same time, great damages has brought to because ofeen done by the vast explorations of natural resources and various forms of pollutions.

The unbalanced process between economic development and environmental protection has became a major issue for so social development, and a increasgrowing concern ofor all people.

The possible cause of this phenomenon and the solutions tof it have drawn widespread attention.

It’s obvious that the causes of that are multiple.

Alternative: It is clear that there are multiple causes.

The most important factor, however, is human behavior.

Since the Industrial Revolution, the world economy has increasedgrown rapidly for with the development of science and technology.

Therefore, even greaterAs a result, growing demand ofor lands and natural resources, and the relentless pollutions, have almost destroyed the environment.

To name somhese devastating problems, include air pollution, water pollution, forest destruction, and species disextinction.

In return, nature and the environment warn us bywith extreme weathers, such as heat waves, sandstorms, acid rain, and global warming.

Firstly, from Tthe perspective of the government, it is crucial to make apprecopriate policies and plans for the balanced progress of economic development and the environmental protection.

For example, many conferences washave been held this year to reach to consensus and negotiate policies, so as to urge countries takingo take immediate actions to protect the environment.

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The power of a single person may be small, but multipley this by 7 billion, and it woruld makeresult in unparalleled changes.

As we all know, lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable asserts.

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There are several reasonfactors which result in suchan unbalanced situation, between economic development and environmental protection, and we human beings must work together to recover the ecosystem and build a beautiful world.

Alternative: Start the sentence with "Thus, [...]", or "In conclusion, [...]"

And I believe with the joint efforts of individuals and the government, it can bethis balance can eventually be achieved.