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emilyyuyi

Dec. 17, 2020

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economic development and environmental protection

Economic development and environmental protection have become common strategies of national policies. And those two have always aroused the greatest concern. What impress us most is the relationship between them.
In addition, current situation of them has been brought into focus. Nowadays, we should take action to deal with them.
At past, the fast economic development due to the sacrifice of environment, which bring us into the dilemma situation. However, with people have better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfort living environment that results in government pay more attention to environment protection, which force the public concerning the economic growth.
When take about the dilemma, the government publish the new policy, which named "green economy". It means that we should find out balance between the economic development and environmental protection. In the national view, we are no longer need "over-fast" economic development with sacrifice the environment. What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved by protecting the environment. Furthermore, we should follow those policies from ourselves. Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-flourish.

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eEconomic development and environmental protection

Economic development and environmental protection have become common strategies of national policiesy.

And those two have alwaysBoth have aroused the greatest concern.

What impress us most is tThe relationship between them. two is impressive and

In addition,their current situation of them has been brought into focus.

Nowadays, we should take action to deal with them.there is an urgent need to take action

At past, the fFast economic development due toat the sacrifice of the environment, which bring us into the dilemma situation. in the past, has lead to what it is today.

However, with people have better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfort living environment that results in government pay more attention toliving more comfortable lives today, more attention is being paid to one's impact on the environment. This increases more government spending on environmental protection, which forcemakes the public more concerning theed about economic growth.

When takelking about the dilemma, the government publish thees a new policy, which named "gtermed the "Green eEconomy".

It means that we should find outThe policy seeks a balance between the economic development and environmental protection.

In theAs a national view, we are no longer need "ovhyper-fast" economic development withhile sacrificeing the environment.

What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved byalso focuses on protecting the environment at the same time.

Furthermore, we should try to follow thoese policies from ourselves.

Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-flourishtake care of the environment, as it will bring us greater prosperity in the long run.

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cattywampus

Dec. 17, 2020

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Furthermore, we should try to follow thoese policies from ourselves.

I don't think you have to include "try to" in this sentence. I agree with the other corrections though. It is grammatically correct and understandable to say: "Furthermore, we should follow these policies ourselves."

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ankitrn

Dec. 17, 2020

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I agree. Thank you!

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emilyyuyi

Dec. 17, 2020

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ok, thank you very much

economic development and environmental protection

And those two have always arousgenerated the greatest concern.

What impress uses me most, is the relationship between them.

In this sentence, I don't know what you mean by impress. Other options could be....interests, amazes

In addition, their current situation of them has been brought into focus.

Nowadays, wWe should take action to deal with them now.

Nowadays is a general statement. Now is much stronger and urges action.

AtIn the past, there was fast economic development due to the sacrifice ofexploitation of the environment, which bring us into the dilemmaour problematic situation today.

However, withhen people have a better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfortable living environment t. That results in governments paying more attention to environment protection, which forces the public to be concerning theed about economic growth.

When take about the dilemma, the government published the new policy, which namedis called the "green economy".

I'm not sure what you mean in the first part of the sentence

It means that we should find outa balance between the economic development and environmental protection.

"find out" is used for information

In the national view, we are no longer need "over-fast" economic development with sacrificehile exploiting the environment.

What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved by protecting the environment.

Furthermore, we should follow those policies from ourselves.

Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-help us flourish longer.

economic development and environmental protection


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eEconomic development and environmental protection

Economic development and environmental protection have become common strategies of national policies.


Economic development and environmental protection have become common strategies of national policiesy.

And those two have always aroused the greatest concern.


And those two have always arousgenerated the greatest concern.

And those two have alwaysBoth have aroused the greatest concern.

What impress us most is the relationship between them.


What impress uses me most, is the relationship between them.

In this sentence, I don't know what you mean by impress. Other options could be....interests, amazes

What impress us most is tThe relationship between them. two is impressive and

In addition, current situation of them has been brought into focus.


In addition, their current situation of them has been brought into focus.

In addition,their current situation of them has been brought into focus.

Nowadays, we should take action to deal with them.


Nowadays, wWe should take action to deal with them now.

Nowadays is a general statement. Now is much stronger and urges action.

Nowadays, we should take action to deal with them.there is an urgent need to take action

At past, the fast economic development due to the sacrifice of environment, which bring us into the dilemma situation.


AtIn the past, there was fast economic development due to the sacrifice ofexploitation of the environment, which bring us into the dilemmaour problematic situation today.

At past, the fFast economic development due toat the sacrifice of the environment, which bring us into the dilemma situation. in the past, has lead to what it is today.

However, with people have better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfort living environment that results in government pay more attention to environment protection, which force the public concerning the economic growth.


However, withhen people have a better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfortable living environment t. That results in governments paying more attention to environment protection, which forces the public to be concerning theed about economic growth.

However, with people have better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfort living environment that results in government pay more attention toliving more comfortable lives today, more attention is being paid to one's impact on the environment. This increases more government spending on environmental protection, which forcemakes the public more concerning theed about economic growth.

When take about the dilemma, the government publish the new policy, which named "green economy".


When take about the dilemma, the government published the new policy, which namedis called the "green economy".

I'm not sure what you mean in the first part of the sentence

When takelking about the dilemma, the government publish thees a new policy, which named "gtermed the "Green eEconomy".

It means that we should find out balance between the economic development and environmental protection.


It means that we should find outa balance between the economic development and environmental protection.

"find out" is used for information

It means that we should find outThe policy seeks a balance between the economic development and environmental protection.

In the national view, we are no longer need "over-fast" economic development with sacrifice the environment.


In the national view, we are no longer need "over-fast" economic development with sacrificehile exploiting the environment.

In theAs a national view, we are no longer need "ovhyper-fast" economic development withhile sacrificeing the environment.

What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved by protecting the environment.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved byalso focuses on protecting the environment at the same time.

Furthermore, we should follow those policies from ourselves.


Furthermore, we should follow those policies from ourselves.

Furthermore, we should try to follow thoese policies from ourselves.

Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-flourish.


Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-help us flourish longer.

Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-flourishtake care of the environment, as it will bring us greater prosperity in the long run.

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