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Friday The 13th

Today is a special day: Friday the 13th. Some people dread this date, but I am not superstitious. Coincidentally, the last Friday the 13th was a remarkably bad day, but that's a story for another post.
At 5 am, I woke up with a flu. Nothing serious, some minor temperature rise and sore throat. However, there was something unusual: lower back pain! I googled it and it seems like it's a normal flu symptome that has just never happened to me before. Internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching. So far, the relief was only temporary.
Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German speaking club in Moscow, which I really want to attend today. However, I am not sure whether it's a good idea to expose my weakened immunity to such a risk.


https://voca.ro/1eJQ12IlNdSS - 53 seconds of me reading this text aloud. I aim for GA, and the only pronunciation problem I am aware of is my GOAT vowel.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

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Friday The 13th

Today is a special day: Friday the 13th.

Some people dread this date, but I am not superstitious.

Coincidentally, the last Friday the 13th was a remarkably bad day, but that's a story for another post.

At 5 am, I woke up with a flu.

Nothing serious, some minor temperature risea (slight/mild) fever and a sore throat.

I googled it and it seems like it's a normal flu symptome that has just never happened to me before.

IThe internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching.

So far, the relief whas been only temporary.

if the condition is still on going, cant use past tense.

Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German -speaking club in Moscow, which I really want to attend today.

However, I am not sure whether it's a good idea to expose my weakened immunitye system to such a risk.

just to make it a bit natural..

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Nice try!

Friday The 13th

Today is a special day: Friday the 13th.

Some people dread this date, but I am not superstitious.

Coincidentally, the last Friday the 13th was a remarkably bad day, but that's a story for another post.

At 5 am, I woke up with athe flu.

Nothing serious, some minorjust a small temperature rise and sore throat.

However, there was something unusual: lower back pain!

I googled it and it seems like it's a normal flu symptome that has just never happened to me before.

The Internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching.

So far, the relief was only temporary.

Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German speaking club in Moscow, which I really wanted to attend today.

However, I am not sure whether it's a good idea to expose my weakened immunity to such a risk.

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Take care!

Friday The 13th


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Today is a special day: Friday the 13th.


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Some people dread this date, but I am not superstitious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Coincidentally, the last Friday the 13th was a remarkably bad day, but that's a story for another post.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At 5 am, I woke up with a flu.


At 5 am, I woke up with athe flu.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nothing serious, some minor temperature rise and sore throat.


Nothing serious, some minorjust a small temperature rise and sore throat.

Nothing serious, some minor temperature risea (slight/mild) fever and a sore throat.

However, there was something unusual: lower back pain!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I googled it and it seems like it's a normal flu symptome that has just never happened to me before.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I googled it and it seems like it's a normal flu symptome that has just never happened to me before.

Internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching.


The Internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching.

IThe internet says that you can alleviate this pain by taking a hot bath, doing light exercise, and stretching.

So far, the relief was only temporary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So far, the relief whas been only temporary.

if the condition is still on going, cant use past tense.

Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German speaking club in Moscow, which I really want to attend today.


Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German speaking club in Moscow, which I really wanted to attend today.

Every Friday, there is a meeting of a German -speaking club in Moscow, which I really want to attend today.

However, I am not sure whether it's a good idea to expose my weakened immunity to such a risk.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I am not sure whether it's a good idea to expose my weakened immunitye system to such a risk.

just to make it a bit natural..

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