April 19, 2022
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else like watching TV and playing with toys.
So he usually eats late.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle.
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else, like watching TV andor playing with toys.
So he usually eats latetakes longer to finish.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slowly, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
Let's keep the adverbs alive ...
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle"The Tortoise and the Hare".
April 20, 2022
Thank you!
April 20, 2022
Thank you!
You're welcome!
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else, like watching TV andor playing with toys.
So he usually eats ltakes a long time to eate.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle."The Tortoise and the Hare"
April 20, 2022
Thank you.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
steadily sounds a bit funny here
April 20, 2022
Thank you.
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else like watching TV andor playing with toys.
So he usually eats latetakes longer to eat.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle"The Tortoise and the Hare".
Feedback
Good writing! :)
April 20, 2022
Thank you so much.
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else like watching TV andor playing with toys.
So he usually eats latetakes longer.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle."The Tortoise and the Hare"
The name of the story in English is "The Tortoise and the Hare"
Feedback
Really well written sentences! The meaning was really clear, good job!
April 20, 2022
Thank you so much. :)
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