Eating more healthilyer

To compare with "healthy," you say healthy, healthier, healthiest.

I hope, you’re fine.

No need for a comma.

I decided to eat more healthilyer a couple of weeks ago because I became incredible motivated by yourselfyou motivated me.

You always say that: „"Eating healthily is half of success.”.

Missing preposition

I’ve already believed in that what we eating is very significant in our life.

At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, b. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.

I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient and energetic.

Now, I can focus on my lectures more wellbetter, and I’d like to go to run or just walk an half our after ending my lessons are over.

Fortunately, I manage to keep my aimto my goal, and every day I’ have breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.

It’s a great success for me.

I eat vegetables and fruits regularly, but less of sweets and chocolates in the same time.

I consume fast food reallvery rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „"cheat day”.”

Write to me as soon as you can!

I hope, you’re fine.

I hope you're well.

A couple of weeks ago, I decided to eat more healthily a couple of weeks ago because I became incredibley motivated by yourself.

You always say that: „"Eating healthily is half the succes”.s."

I’ve already believed in that eating is very significant in our lifeves.

At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, b. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.

I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient, and more energetic.

Additionally, I couldn’t study well, because I always wanted to eat something.

Now, I can focus on my lectures more wellbetter and I’d like to go to running or just walk anfor half an hour after ending my lessonclass ends.

Fortunately, I have managed to keep my aimotivation/my goal and every day I’ve breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.

It’s great success for me.

I eat vegetables and fruits regularly butand less of sweets and chocolates inat the same time.

these are all considered good things, so I changed "but" to "and"

I rarely consume fast food really rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „cheat day”"cheat day” per week/every few weeks.

Write to me as soon as possible!

"Write to me as soon as possible!" can sound a bit commanding.
You can also say: "I'd love it/I'd be happy if you could write to me as soon as you can!"