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Sept. 25, 2020

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If I didn't eat at home, I would prefer to eat box lunch or Chinese fast food. The same stuff of these two kinds of food is that there are rice, steamed bread, small portion dishes, and porridge or soup. If I choose a box lunch, I usually choose the eight Cny one, two small portion vegetables, one small portion of meat and a portion of rice or steamed bread. The soup or porridge is free. If I ate Chinese fast food, I would pick steamed bread or a small bowl of rice, a small plate of vegetables, and a small bowl of porridge or a small bowl of soup. That would cost me ten Cny. (One Cny for rice or steamed bread, six Cny for the dish, and three Cny for the porridge or soup. Although it costs less, I feel good and satisfied. I don't like to eat out, especially with many people. I think it is very annoying. I like to eat with myself and eat at home. I hate wasting time eating, because many things are waiting for me to do. Time for everyone is limited. We should make every minute meaningful.

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If I didn't eat at home, I would prefer to eat box lunches or Chinese fast food.

The same stuff of these two kinds of food is that there arboth include rice, steamed bread, small portion dishsizes, and porridge or soup.

If I chooseWhen I eat a box lunch, I usually choose the eight Cny one,one that costs eight CNY. It includes two small portions of vegetables, one small portion of meat, and a portion of rice or steamed bread.

The soup or porridge is free.

IfWhen I eate Chinese fast food, I would pickpick a meal that includes steamed bread or a small bowl of rice, a small plate of vegetables, and a small bowl of porridge or a small bowl of soup.

That wouldIt costs me ten CnyNY.

(One Cny forTen CNY is the sum of one CNY for the rice or steamed bread, six CnyNY for the dish, and three CnyNY for the porridge or soup. Al) Even though it costs less, I still feel good and satisfied. I don't like to eat out, especially with many people. I think it is very annoying. I like to eat withby myself and eat at home. I hate wasting time eating, because many other things are waiting for me to do. Time for everyon. Everyone's time is limited. We should make every minute meaningful.

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Jack

Sept. 25, 2020

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谢谢你的修改,他对我很重要。谢谢你!

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If I didn't eat at home, I would prefer to eat box lunch or Chinese fast food.


If I didn't eat at home, I would prefer to eat box lunches or Chinese fast food.

The same stuff of these two kinds of food is that there are rice, steamed bread, small portion dishes, and porridge or soup.


The same stuff of these two kinds of food is that there arboth include rice, steamed bread, small portion dishsizes, and porridge or soup.

If I choose a box lunch, I usually choose the eight Cny one, two small portion vegetables, one small portion of meat and a portion of rice or steamed bread.


If I chooseWhen I eat a box lunch, I usually choose the eight Cny one,one that costs eight CNY. It includes two small portions of vegetables, one small portion of meat, and a portion of rice or steamed bread.

The soup or porridge is free.


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If I ate Chinese fast food, I would pick steamed bread or a small bowl of rice, a small plate of vegetables, and a small bowl of porridge or a small bowl of soup.


IfWhen I eate Chinese fast food, I would pickpick a meal that includes steamed bread or a small bowl of rice, a small plate of vegetables, and a small bowl of porridge or a small bowl of soup.

That would cost me ten Cny.


That wouldIt costs me ten CnyNY.

(One Cny for rice or steamed bread, six Cny for the dish, and three Cny for the porridge or soup. Although it costs less, I feel good and satisfied. I don't like to eat out, especially with many people. I think it is very annoying. I like to eat with myself and eat at home. I hate wasting time eating, because many things are waiting for me to do. Time for everyone is limited. We should make every minute meaningful.


(One Cny forTen CNY is the sum of one CNY for the rice or steamed bread, six CnyNY for the dish, and three CnyNY for the porridge or soup. Al) Even though it costs less, I still feel good and satisfied. I don't like to eat out, especially with many people. I think it is very annoying. I like to eat withby myself and eat at home. I hate wasting time eating, because many other things are waiting for me to do. Time for everyon. Everyone's time is limited. We should make every minute meaningful.

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