Oct. 22, 2022
Easy-to-access barber for the elderly
A 30-minute walk from my house in Sapporo brings me to the highway. My favorite barber is on a sideway branching off from the road. After having a fresh haircut, I leave the shop, saying, "Take care. I'll be back."
The barber is a blazingly active 87-years-old man. Although he works alone, he had some seeming apprentices earlier. He might be the oldest barber in the city. Despite his advanced age, he grips scissors tightly. According to him, most of his age mates died from barber schools around the city. He seems to have been working as a barber for around 70 years.
His shaving technique is fantastic. I realize that he changes his mode the moment he starts shaving. "My hands move spontaneously," he says. Taking time, he respectfully cuts my hair. Allowing myself soothing time flow is a rewarding experience I have once a month.
The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding cutting hair keeps his condition great. He talks to me naturally and decently, not being talkative. Also, being familiar with the local history, he entertains me with his knowledge. Due to easy access to the shop, the elderly, including one with 100 years old, come to get a haircut, he told. I want to say thanks to the master of our city.
AThere is a highway a 30- minute walk from my house in Sapporo brings me to the highway.
My favorite barber is on a sideway street, branching off from the main road.
After having a fresh haircut, I leave the shop, saying, "Take care.,
The barber is a blazingly active 87- years- old man.
Although he works alone, he had some seeming apprentices earlier.
Despite his advanced age, he grips the scissors tightly.
According to him, most of his age mates diedfriends from barber schools around the city have died.
Allowing myself the soothing time flow is a rewarding experience I have once a month.
Due to easy access to the shop, the elderly, including one witha customer of over 100 years old, come to get a haircut, he told me.
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Good job!
Oct. 22, 2022
Thank you!
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A 30-minute walk from my house in Sapporo brings me to the highway.
My favorite barber is on a sideway road branching off from the main road.
After having a fresh haircut, I leave the shop, saying, "Take care.
I'll be back."
The barber is a blazn astoundingly active 87- years- old man.
I like the word "blazingly" because I get what you're trying to say so you can keep that if you want. English is constantly evolving.
Although he works alone, he had some seeming apprentices earlier.
He might be the oldest barber in the city.
Despite his advanced age, he grips scissors tightly.
According to him, most of his age mates died from barber schools around the city his age have died.
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According to him, most of his mates his age from barber schools around the city have passed away.
He seems to haveIt sounds as if he's been working as a barber for around 70 years.
His shaving technique is fantastic.
I realize that he changes his mode the moment he starts shaving.
"My hands move spontaneously," he says.
Taking his time, he respectfully cuts my hair.
Allowing myself this soothing time flow is a rewarding experience I havegive myself once a month.
すごい！
The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding that cutting hair keeps his physical condition in great shape.
He talks to me naturally and decently, while not being talkative.
Also, being familiar with the local history, he entertains me with his knowledge.
Due to the easy access to the shop, the elderly, including one withho is 100 years old, come to get a haircut, he tolsaid.
I want to say thanks to the master of our city.
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いい話です。教えてくれてありがとうございました。よく出来ました！
Oct. 22, 2022
いつもありがとう！
After havgetting a fresh haircut, I leave the shop, saying, "Take care.
In my opinion, "getting" sounds more natural
The barber is a blazingly active 87-years-old man.
Although he works alone, he had some seemingseemed to have some apprentices earlier.
Despite his advanced age, he can still grips scissors tightly.
The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding that cutting hair keeps hism in great condition great.
He talks to me naturally and decently, nowithout being too talkative.
Due to easy access to the shop, the elderly, including one with 100 -years -old, come to get a haircut, he told.
you could also use the word "centenarian"
Oct. 22, 2022
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According to him, most of his age mates died from barber schools around the city. According to him, most of his or According to him, most of his mates his age from barber schools around the city have passed away. According to him, most of his |
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He seems to have been working as a barber for around 70 years.
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His shaving technique is fantastic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I realize that he changes his mode the moment he starts shaving. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"My hands move spontaneously," he says. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Taking time, he respectfully cuts my hair. Taking his time, he respectfully cuts my hair. |
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Allowing myself soothing time flow is a rewarding experience I have once a month. Allowing myself this soothing time すごい！ Allowing myself the soothing time |
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The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding cutting hair keeps his condition great. The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding that cutting hair keeps hi The old barber told me that he loves what he does, adding that cutting hair keeps his physical condition in great shape. |
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He talks to me naturally and decently, not being talkative. He talks to me naturally and decently, He talks to me naturally and decently |
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Also, being familiar with the local history, he entertains me with his knowledge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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