Jan. 2, 2024
Earthquake (8)
Last night, a big earthquake occurred in Western Japan.
It reminded me of the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
The one last night was as big as the one in 2011, but it seems that there weren't terrible tsunamis.
However, I saw lots of houses burning on the news.
That was a heartbreak.
I experienced Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
I live in Chiba prefecture which is far from Tohoku, but the one occurred very wide area, so we had lots of damages in my town as well.
So it made me traumatized and when an earthquake starts to shake my heart starts to beat fast.
昨夜、西日本で大きな地震がありました。
2011年の地震を思い出しました。
昨夜の地震は2011年の地震と同じくらい大きかったけど、ひどい津波はなかったようです。
でも、ニュースで、たくさんの家が燃えているのを見ました。
とても心が痛みました。
私は、2011年に東北地震を経験しました。
私は、東北から離れた千葉県に住んでいますが、その地震は広範囲に影響を及ぼしたので、私の町でもたくさんの被害がありました。
それがトラウマになって、今でも地震が揺れ始めると心臓がドキドキします。
Earthquake (8)
Last night, a big earthquake occurred in Western Japan.
It reminded me of the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
The one last night was as big as the one in 2011, but it seems that there weren't terrible tsunamis.
It's grammatically correct but a little awkward/ambiguous. Could try something like "The one last night was just as big, but without the terrible tsunamis."
However, I saw lots of houses burning on the news.
ThaIt was a heart-breaking.
I experienced the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
I live in the Chiba prefecture which is far from Tohoku, but the one occurred veryearthquake affected such a wide area, so that we had lots of damages in my town as well.
So it made me traumatized and when an earthquake starts to shake my heart starts to beat fastI was traumatized, so now my heart beats fast whenever the ground shakes.
Jan. 2, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
Earthquake (8)
Last night, a big earthquake occurred in Western Japan.
It reminded me of the Tohokukyo earthquake in 2011.
Guessing it was just a typo.
The one last night was as big as the one in 2011, but it seems that there weren't terrible tsunamis.
This is correct but I don’t get why tsunamis are being mentioned.
However, I saw lots of houses burning on the news.
That was a heartbreak.
Don’t get this.
I experienced Tohokuthe Tokyo earthquake in 2011.
Just the city name again.
I live in Chiba prefecture which is far from Tohokukyo, but ithe one occurred across a very wide area, so we had lots of damages in my town as well.
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Very interesting and minor mistakes.
Jan. 2, 2024
Tohoku、東北、とうほく is a name of the east north area in Japan.
I mentioned the tsunami is because there were a lot of tsunamis in Tohoku area in 2011, but last night there were only a little bit of tsunami in the Western area.
Jan. 2, 2024
Thank you for your correction!
Last night, a big earthquake occurred in Western Japan.
It reminded me of the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
The one last night was as big as the one in 2011, but it seems that there weren't terrible tsunamis.
Note that the wording is a little ambiguous. It implies that there were tsunamis but they weren't terrible.
However, I saw lots of houses burning on the news.
That was a heartbreaking.
I experienced the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
I live in Chiba prefecture, which is far from Tohoku, but the one occurredearthquake affected a very wide area, so we had lots of damages even in my town as well.
So it made me traumatized me and when an earthquake starts to shake my heart starts to beat fahits my heart beats out of my chest.
I worded it more naturally.
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I'm glad you're okay! Take care!
Jan. 2, 2024
Thank you so much the new phrase. Yes, whenever an earthquake hits my hear beats out of my chest.
地震が起こるたびに心臓が飛び出しそうになります。
Last night, a big earthquake occurredtook place in Western Japan.
I live in Chiba prefecture which is far from Tohoku, but the one occurredis earthquake affected a very wide area, so we had lots of damages in my town as well.
So it made meIt was traumatized and wing. When an earthquake starts to shake, my heart starts to beating fast.
Jan. 2, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
That was a heartbreaking.
to describe "heartbreak" as a feeling you experience: heartbreaking
I experienced the Tohoku earthquake in 2011.
I live in Chiba prefecture which is far from Tohoku, but theat one occurredaffected a very wide area, so we had lots of damages in my town(OR: my town suffered a lot of damage) as well.
So it made meIt traumatized andme, so whenever an earthquake starts to, and everything is shakeing, my heart starts to beat fast.
original sounded unnatural
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I heard about the earthquake, thank goodness people are okay! I still vaguely remember hearing news about the Tohoku earthquake years ago too!
Jan. 2, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction.
We often have earthquakes in Japan, and a huge one will take place in a few years around here according to specialists, so I'm scared.
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So it made me traumatized and when an earthquake starts to shake my heart starts to beat fast.
original sounded unnatural
So it I worded it more naturally.
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