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kiwy

Nov. 28, 2021

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Early Winter

I live in south China, so it is quite warm in early winter. I love the weather very much.
As the daytime becomes shorter and shorter, I think the sunshine is more adorable.

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I live in southern China, so it is quite warm in early winter.

I love theis kind of weather very much.

As the daytimes becomes shorter and shorter, I thfinkd the sunshine isthe more adorable.

Adorable isn't the correct word in this context, it is better suited to a cute animal or person. You could say beautiful, or precious?

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Really good :)

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kiwy

Nov. 29, 2021

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Thank you.

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I live in southern China, so it is quite warm in early winter.

You can also say "I live in the south of China".

I love theis weather very much.

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Well done ! That's a nice way to think of winter 😃

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kiwy

Nov. 29, 2021

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Thank you.

Early Winter

I live in south China, so it is quite warm in early winter.

I live in southern China, so it is quite warm in early winter.

You can also say "I live in the south of China".

I live in southern China, so it is quite warm in early winter.

I love the weather very much.

I love theis weather very much.

I love theis kind of weather very much.

As the daytime becomes shorter and shorter, I think the sunshine is more adorable.

As the daytimes becomes shorter and shorter, I thfinkd the sunshine isthe more adorable.

Adorable isn't the correct word in this context, it is better suited to a cute animal or person. You could say beautiful, or precious?

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