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megu

Oct. 12, 2023

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Early bird

Nowadays, I try to wake up early. In British English, it can call “early riser” this means a person who wake up early. I realized many benefits of it. Firstly, I can wake up feeling refreshed. I used to didn’t wake up feel good but now I feel so refreshed. Secondly, it is good for my health because after started this trial, I don’t have a dinner. I changed the eating time I instead of sleeping time. Then I can detox and clean my body from inside. In addition, my skin condition has been so good. Finally I felt one more benefit. If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare to get ready that’s why I don’t missed a train and classes. Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise. In conclusion, wake up early and I’ll succeed. Early to bed, early to rise, makes my healthy, wealthy and wise. I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to but I’m sure you will be able to feel better to wake up early!

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In British English, it can call “early riser” this means a person who wake up earlya person who wakes up early can be called an "early riser".

I realized there are many benefits tof it.

I used to didn’t wake up feel goodnot feel good when I woke up, but now I feel so refreshed.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after I started this trial, I don’t have aeat dinner.

I changed the eating time I eat instead of my sleeping time.

In addition, my skin condition has been so good.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a my train and classes.

In conclusion, if I wake up early and I’ll succeed.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toby wakeing up early!

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Good work!

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megu

Oct. 16, 2023

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Thank you very much!

Early bird

Nowadays, I try to wake up early.

In British English, ityou can callsay “early riser” this, which means a person who wakes up early.

I realized there are many benefits of it.(to this / to waking up early.)

Firstly, I can wake up feeling refreshed.

I used to didn’t wake up not feeling good, but now I feel so refreshed.

Secondly, it is good for my health, because after started this trial, I don’tdoing this, I no longer have a dinner.

I changed the eatingnstead of eating at that time, I instead of sleeping timesleep.

Then I can detox and clean my body from the inside out.

In addition, my skin (condition) has been so goodgreat.

You can use condition, but we usually just say "my skin is..."

Finally, I feltexperienced one more benefit.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready so that’s why I don't missed a train andor classes.

Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise.

In conclusion, wake up early and I’you'll succeed.

Or "If I wake up early, I'll succeed."

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

You can also use the actual phrase here with "us". Both are okay.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to but I’m sure you will be able to feel better to wake up early!

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A very good habit! Don't forget to eat and sleep enough to support your body though! Food and sleep are both important too ;)

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megu

Oct. 16, 2023

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Thank you so much!!

Early bird

Nowadays, I try to wake up early.

In British English, it can call “early riser” this meanswe call a person who wakes up early an "early riser".

I realized many benefits of itwaking up early.

In your last sentence, you talked about "early riser". In this sentence, the "it" you are referring to is the act of waking up early so you should define it for better clarity.

I used to didn’t wake up feel goodnot feel good when I woke up, but now I feel so refreshed.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after started this trialdoing this, I don’t have aeat dinner.

doing this = waking up early

I changed the usual eating time I instead ofto sleeping time.

More natural way to say this: "I changed the usual time I would eat to the time I go to sleep."

Finally, I felt one more benefit.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare to get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a the train or andy classes.

Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise.

In conclusion, if I wake up early and I’, I will succeed.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mySleep early, wake up early, be healthy, wealthy and wise.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re get used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toif you wake up early!

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I like waking up early too. I have so much time to myself if I wake up between 5 am to 7 am. Good luck with maintaining this good habit!

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megu

Oct. 12, 2023

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I’m with you!
Thank you so much!

Early bird

Nowadays, I try to wake up early.

In British English, it can be called “early riser” t. This means a person who wakes up early.

I realized there are many benefits of itto waking up early.

Firstly, I can wake up feeling refreshed.

I used to didn’not wake up feel gooding well, but now I feel so refreshed.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after having started this trial, I don’t have aeat dinner.

I changed the eating time I eat instead of sleeping timethe time I sleep.

Then I can detox and clean my body from insidewithin.

In addition, my skin condition has been so gooimproved.

Finally, I fcan feelt one more benefit.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a the train andor classes.

Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise.

In conclusion, wakeing up early meands I’ll succeed.

The sentence is actually fine, but sounds a bit awkward. I corrected it to sound better.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toafter wakeing up early!

The ending of the sentence "I’m sure you will be able to feel better to wake up early!" sounds awkward, so I edited it.

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megu

Oct. 12, 2023

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Thank you so much!

Early bird


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Nowadays, I try to wake up early.


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Nowadays, I try to wake up early.

In British English, it can call “early riser” this means a person who wake up early.


In British English, it can be called “early riser” t. This means a person who wakes up early.

In British English, it can call “early riser” this meanswe call a person who wakes up early an "early riser".

In British English, ityou can callsay “early riser” this, which means a person who wakes up early.

In British English, it can call “early riser” this means a person who wake up earlya person who wakes up early can be called an "early riser".

I realized many benefits of it.


I realized there are many benefits of itto waking up early.

I realized many benefits of itwaking up early.

In your last sentence, you talked about "early riser". In this sentence, the "it" you are referring to is the act of waking up early so you should define it for better clarity.

I realized there are many benefits of it.(to this / to waking up early.)

I realized there are many benefits tof it.

Firstly, I can wake up feeling refreshed.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to didn’t wake up feel good but now I feel so refreshed.


I used to didn’not wake up feel gooding well, but now I feel so refreshed.

I used to didn’t wake up feel goodnot feel good when I woke up, but now I feel so refreshed.

I used to didn’t wake up not feeling good, but now I feel so refreshed.

I used to didn’t wake up feel goodnot feel good when I woke up, but now I feel so refreshed.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after started this trial, I don’t have a dinner.


Secondly, it is good for my health because after having started this trial, I don’t have aeat dinner.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after started this trialdoing this, I don’t have aeat dinner.

doing this = waking up early

Secondly, it is good for my health, because after started this trial, I don’tdoing this, I no longer have a dinner.

Secondly, it is good for my health because after I started this trial, I don’t have aeat dinner.

I changed the eating time I instead of sleeping time.


I changed the usual eating time I instead ofto sleeping time.

More natural way to say this: "I changed the usual time I would eat to the time I go to sleep."

I changed the eating time I eat instead of sleeping timethe time I sleep.

I changed the eatingnstead of eating at that time, I instead of sleeping timesleep.

I changed the eating time I eat instead of my sleeping time.

Then I can detox and clean my body from inside.


Then I can detox and clean my body from insidewithin.

Then I can detox and clean my body from the inside out.

In addition, my skin condition has been so good.


In addition, my skin condition has been so gooimproved.

In addition, my skin (condition) has been so goodgreat.

You can use condition, but we usually just say "my skin is..."

In addition, my skin condition has been so good.

Finally I felt one more benefit.


Finally, I felt one more benefit.

Finally, I fcan feelt one more benefit.

Finally, I feltexperienced one more benefit.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare to get ready that’s why I don’t missed a train and classes.


If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a the train andor classes.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare to get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a the train or andy classes.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready so that’s why I don't missed a train andor classes.

If I wake up early, I have enough time to prepare toand get ready t. That’s why I don’t missed a my train and classes.

Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Furthermore, if I have energy, I can study and exercise.

In conclusion, wake up early and I’ll succeed.


In conclusion, wakeing up early meands I’ll succeed.

The sentence is actually fine, but sounds a bit awkward. I corrected it to sound better.

In conclusion, if I wake up early and I’, I will succeed.

In conclusion, wake up early and I’you'll succeed.

Or "If I wake up early, I'll succeed."

In conclusion, if I wake up early and I’ll succeed.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes my healthy, wealthy and wise.


Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mySleep early, wake up early, be healthy, wealthy and wise.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

You can also use the actual phrase here with "us". Both are okay.

Early to bed, early to rise, makes mye healthy, wealthy and wise.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to but I’m sure you will be able to feel better to wake up early!


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I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re get used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toif you wake up early!

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toafter wakeing up early!

The ending of the sentence "I’m sure you will be able to feel better to wake up early!" sounds awkward, so I edited it.

I think it’s a little bit difficult until you’re used to it, but I’m sure you will be able to feel better toby wakeing up early!

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