July 6, 2022
The first day is hard in the school. It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet. I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers . But I don't know if the peopel nice there. My mother search that for me out and I like her. Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel. I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I hope also that will good and I found new friend . Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august . Wish me luck but now I can relax and me lay down.
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The first day is hard in the schoolof school is hard.
The first day of school is hard.
It givesYou meet new peopele and new school- subject its, so feels different and it feels, like a another planet.
You meet new people and new school subjects, so feels different, like a another planet.
I've come this year into a business school. I tookjoined this school because I like math and numbers .
I've come this year to a business school. I joined this school because I like math and numbers .
But I don't know if the peopele are nice there.
But I don't know if the people are nice there.
My mother searched that for me out, and I like her.
My mother searched that for me, and I like her.
Is this what you meant here? I wasn't sure :)
Still, I am nervous and shy about the new school and thereit's peopele.
Still, I am nervous and shy about the new school and it's people.
I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible. I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible.
I hope also that it will be good and I fouind new friend s.
I hope also that it will be good and I find new friends.
Yet nNow are summer, and we traveled there to pParis and we revelaled the birthday from me and my little brother in aAugust .
Now are summer, and we traveled there to Paris and revealed the birthday from me and my little brother in August.
In English we capitalize place names (like in Paris, India, and Europe), days of the week (like in Saturday), and months (August).
Wish me luck but! But for now, I can relax and me lay down.
Wish me luck! But for now, I can relax and me lay down.
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Nice work! I wish you all the best at your new school. I'm sure you will have a great time.
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The first day is hard in the school.
The first day |
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It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet.
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I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers .
I've come this year |
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But I don't know if the peopel nice there.
But I don't know if the peop |
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My mother search that for me out and I like her.
My mother searched that for me Is this what you meant here? I wasn't sure :) |
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Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel.
Still, I am nervous and shy about the new school and |
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I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible. I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible. |
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I hope also that will good and I found new friend .
I hope also that it will be good and I f |
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Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august .
In English we capitalize place names (like in Paris, India, and Europe), days of the week (like in Saturday), and months (August). |
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Wish me luck but now I can relax and me lay down.
Wish me luck |
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