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My Second Car

My second car

In 2014, my son ended a job in Hangzhou and returned to my home city. He was in his twenties back then. According to Chinese tradition, that age was supposed to find a girlfriend. In order to find a girlfriend early for him, I gave the Passat to him, therefore I didn't have a car to drive.

Suddenly, the fact that I didn't have a car to drive made it very inconvenient for me in my daily life. I could only ride an e-bike or go somewhere by walking. I realized that just one car was not enough for my family, so I was planning to buy another car.

This time, I wanted to buy an SUV. An SUV could go anywhere because it had a large clearance from the ground. The first SUV model that came to my mind was Tiguan because its sales volume had been the first in my country for several consecutive years.

After I told my wife about my thoughts, she didn't agree with me and she told me that we should buy an expensive one. I was like "maybe we can buy an Audi A 6?" She still denied my idea. She was like "we should buy a class d car, such as Audi A 8, Mercedes benz s, or BMW 7 Series." I was shocked by her idea. After all, we were not rich people.

I started to look for information on the internet about these three car models, such as their looks, prices and configurations.

After a lot of work on estimating, I decided to buy a BMW 730 luxury because it was the cheapest among the three car models with the same configuration.

I inquired about its price from many BMW 4 s stores in big domestic cities, and Beijing Baocheng BMW 4 s store offered me the cheapest price.

In November 2015, my second older brother, my son and I went to Beijing to buy it. The BMW official offer was 1038000 RMB, but the store cut it 26 percent for me. Together with other fees, I paid more than 800000 RMB for this car.

Beijing was so big, we spent about an hour driving away from it. My second older brother and my son took turns driving the car. Beijing was more than 800 kilometers away from my city. We started to drive home that afternoon and arrived home the next morning. Of course, we rested in a hotel half way home that night.

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My Second Car

My second car

In 2014, my son ended a job in Hangzhou and returned to my home city.

He was in his twenties back then.

This time, I wanted to buy an SUV.

She still denied my idea.

I was shocked by her idea.

After all, we were not rich people.

I started to look for information on the internet about these three car models, such as their looks, prices and configurations.

In November 2015, my second older brother, my son and I went to Beijing to buy it.

Together with other fees, I paid more than 800000 RMB for this car.

My second older brother and my son took turns driving the car.

Beijing was more than 800 kilometers away from my city.

We started to drive home that afternoon and arrived home the next morning.

Of course, we rested in a hotel half way home that night.

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Jack

Feb. 13, 2023

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My Second Car

In 2014, my son ended a job in Hangzhou and returned to my home city.

He was in his twenties back then.

Suddenly, the fact that I didn't have a car to drive made it very inconvenient for me in my daily life.

I realized that just one car was not enough for my family, so I was planning to buy another car.

This time, I wanted to buy an SUV.

I was shocked by her idea.

After all, we were not rich people.

I started to look for information on the internet about these three car models, such as their looks, prices and configurations.

In November 2015, my second older brother, my son and I went to Beijing to buy it.

My second older brother and my son took turns driving the car.

Beijing was more than 800 kilometers away from my city.

Of course, we rested in a hotel half way home that night.

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Jack

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In November 2015, me, my second oelderst brother, and my son and I went to Beijing to buy it.

If you have 2 older brothers and you were talking about the youngest of the two here, you'd say "second eldest brother."

If you have 2 brothers, one older and one younger, you'd just say "eldest brother"

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My second oelderst brother and my son took turns driving the car.

If you have 2 older brothers and you were talking about the youngest of the two here, you'd say "second oldest/eldest brother."

If you have 2 brothers, one older and one younger, you'd just say "eldest brother"

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Jack

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My Second Car

He was in his twenties back then.

This time, I wanted to buy an SUV.

I was shocked by her idea.

After all, we were not rich people.

I started to look for information on the internet about these three car models, such as their looks, prices and configurations.

Beijing was more than 800 kilometers away from my city.

We started to drive home that afternoon and arrived home the next morning.

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After all, we were not rich people.


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I started to look for information on the internet about these three car models, such as their looks, prices and configurations.


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After a lot of work on estimating, I decided to buy a BMW 730 luxury because it was the cheapest among the three car models with the same configuration.


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The BMW official offer was 1038000 RMB, but the store cut it 26 percent for me.


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My second older brother and my son took turns driving the car.


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If you have 2 older brothers and you were talking about the youngest of the two here, you'd say "second oldest/eldest brother." If you have 2 brothers, one older and one younger, you'd just say "eldest brother"

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Beijing was more than 800 kilometers away from my city.


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We started to drive home that afternoon and arrived home the next morning.


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Of course, we rested in a hotel half way home that night.


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