March 3, 2021
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The development of science has brought us a great change in our daily lives, and now, I want to talk something about it.
When I started to work, I wanted a lawyer's certificate, but I didn't know how to get it. Like, what conditions I should have, how many subjects do you have to pass in the exam, etc. It was so difficult to get this kind of information at that time. It was about 2000, I bought myself the first phone and it was Nokia C 5-03. This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems no other use. Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and not many other uses. Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for call, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone. Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be through a phone. Seeing doctors can be through a phone. Paying various bills can also be by phone. In short, nothing can't be done with a phone. For me, the features of the phone I like the most may be the following: you can search for everything you want to know by phone, and you can study anything on your phone. There are many various learning apps, and the net speed nowadays is really fast. That is to say it is very convenient no matter what things you do on your phone. So I think the progress of science and technology is really amazing and has changed our lives dramatically, and we can't go back to the backward days anymore.
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The development of science has brought us a great change in our daily lives, and now, I want to talksay something about it.
The development of science has brought us a great change in our daily lives, and now, I want to say something about it.
Or just "I want to talk about it."
When I started to working, I wanted a lawyer's certificate, but I didn't know how to get it.
When I started working, I wanted a lawyer's certificate, but I didn't know how to get it.
LikFor example, what conditions I should have, how many subjects do you have to pass in the exam, etc.
For example, what conditions I should have, how many subjects do you have to pass in the exam, etc.
It was about 2000, I bought myself themy first phone and it was Nokia C 5-03.
It was about 2000, I bought myself my first phone and it was Nokia C 5-03.
"The first phone" implies that it was the first commercially available phone. Apologies if this was intentional.
This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems to have no other use. This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems to have no other use.
Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and notdoesn't have many other uses.
Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and doesn't have many other uses.
Or "and not for much else."
Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for calls, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone. Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for calls, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone.
Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be done through a phone. Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be done through a phone.
Seeing doctors can be done through a phone. Seeing doctors can be done through a phone.
Paying various bills can also be done by phone. Paying various bills can also be done by phone.
In short, nothing can't be done with a phone. In short, nothing can't be done with a phone.
It's more idiomatic to say "there's nothing that can't be done with a phone."
There are many various learning apps, and the net speed nowadays is really fast.
There are various learning apps, and the net speed nowadays is really fast.
You'd say "many" or "various", but not both.
March 5, 2021
It was about 2000, I bought myself themy first phone and it was Nokia C 5-03.
"The first phone" implies that it was the first commercially available phone. Apologies if this was intentional.
I didn’t mean that. I mean that this mobile phone is the first phone I ever use. That is say, I have never used a phone before.
March 5, 2021
This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems to have no other use.
It seems to have no other use.
It seems no other use
Is the second sentence correct?
Could please explain more about the first sentence? I didn’t understand why you added “to have” well.
March 5, 2021
Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and notdoesn't have many other uses.
Or "and not for much else."
Please tell me the mistakes that the original sentence has.
March 6, 2021
Can be done. Thank you very much.
March 6, 2021
I didn’t mean that. I mean that this mobile phone is the first phone I ever use. That is say, I have never used a phone before.
Thanks for the clarification. In this case then you want to use "I bought myself my first phone".
March 6, 2021
It seems to have no other use. It seems no other use Is the second sentence correct? Could please explain more about the first sentence? I didn’t understand why you added “to have” well.
I can't explain the grammar too well, but "It seems no other use" isn't complete on its own, it's missing a word or two. Some other ways you could phrase it are:
"it has no other use"
"it doesn't have any other use"
I think that it's because "use" is being used as a noun here, so you can't say "the phone is a use", you'd say "the phone has a use".
March 6, 2021
Please tell me the mistakes that the original sentence has.
To simplify it, I believe it's ungrammatical to say "is for not many uses", or even "is not for many uses". It's related to a comment that I've just made, but you would instead need to say "does not/doesn't have have many uses". Again, I think you need to include "has/have" here because "uses" is being used as a noun.
March 6, 2021
Thank you very much.
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The development of science has brought us a great change in our daily lives, and now, I want to talk something about it.
The development of science has brought us a great change in our daily lives, and now, I want to Or just "I want to talk about it." |
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When I started to work, I wanted a lawyer's certificate, but I didn't know how to get it.
When I started |
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Like, what conditions I should have, how many subjects do you have to pass in the exam, etc.
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It was so difficult to get this kind of information at that time. |
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It was about 2000, I bought myself the first phone and it was Nokia C 5-03.
It was about 2000, I bought myself "The first phone" implies that it was the first commercially available phone. Apologies if this was intentional. |
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This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems no other use. This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems to have no other use. This phone makes it easier to communicate with family, friends and colleagues, but apart from this, it seems to have no other use. |
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Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and not many other uses.
Even around 2010, I think a phone is just for calls and Or "and not for much else." |
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Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for call, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone. Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for calls, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone. Recently, the big feeling is that I don't think a phone is just a phone or its function is just for calls, instead a phone can be everything, and you can't even live without a phone. |
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Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be through a phone. Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be done through a phone. Ordering food, clothes, even cars or houses can be done through a phone. |
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Seeing doctors can be through a phone. Seeing doctors can be done through a phone. Seeing doctors can be done through a phone. |
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Paying various bills can also be by phone. Paying various bills can also be done by phone. Paying various bills can also be done by phone. |
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In short, nothing can't be done with a phone. In short, nothing can't be done with a phone. In short, nothing can't be done with a phone. It's more idiomatic to say "there's nothing that can't be done with a phone." |
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For me, the features of the phone I like the most may be the following: you can search for everything you want to know by phone, and you can study anything on your phone. |
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There are many various learning apps, and the net speed nowadays is really fast.
There are You'd say "many" or "various", but not both. |
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That is to say it is very convenient no matter what things you do on your phone. |
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So I think the progress of science and technology is really amazing and has changed our lives dramatically, and we can't go back to the backward days anymore. |
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