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My trip to Switzerland: Day 3, morning (part 2)

When we arrived at the peak of First, it was really cloudy and windy. There was supposed to be a nice view of Eiger from the top, but we couldn't see any mountains as well as Eiger. We first tried First cliff walk, where a walkway is installed right next to the vertical cliff of First, but the view from the end of the walkway was less beautiful than pictures of it I saw on the internet. After that, I took a short hike with my wife to Bachalpsee Lake, which is known as the "Jewel of the Alps" because of its scenic reflection of Eiger and JungFrau. The hike was pleasant and enjoyable, but the view of the lake was, to be honest, very disappointing, because the cloudy weather made the view nothing but just a body of water -- Where was the jewel?! But, on our way back to the cable car station after the disappointing experience, the weather was getting better and better, and finally the clouds were completely gone and we could see an overwhelming view of the mountains. I even started to regret to take a hike to Bachalpsee Lake, so it made this hike even more rewarding and eventually I could consider the trail was worth to take. After we arrived back at the cable car station, we had lunch at a restaurant nearby. I enjoyed a lot (but I was not happy about the price, it was too expensive!)

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My trip to Switzerland: Day 3, morning (part 2)


When we arrived at the peak of First, it was really cloudy and windy.


When we arrived at the peak of FirstGRAMMAR: Specify who "we" is. (After readers know who "we" refers to, that pronoun is fine.) Also, what is "First"? OPTION A: When my family and I arrived at the peak of the first mountain, it was really cloudy and windy. OPTION B: When my friends and I arrived at the summit of the first mountain, it was really cloudy and windy. GRAMMAR: Specify who "we" is. (After readers know who "we" refers to, that pronoun is fine.) Also, what is "First"? OPTION A: When my family and I arrived at the peak of the first mountain, it was really cloudy and windy. OPTION B: When my friends and I arrived at the summit of the first mountain, it was really cloudy and windy.

There was supposed to be a nice view of Eiger from the top, but we couldn't see any mountains as well as Eiger.


There was supposed to be a nice view of the Eiger from the topthere, but we couldn't see any mountains as well as the Eiger itself. There was supposed to be a nice view of the Eiger there, but we couldn't see any mountains as well as the Eiger itself.

After that, I took a short hike with my wife to Bachalpsee Lake, which is known as the "Jewel of the Alps" because of its scenic reflection of Eiger and JungFrau.


After that, I took a short hike with my wife to Bachalpsee Lake, which is known as the "Jewel of the Alps" because of its scenic reflection of Eiger and JungFrau. After that, I took a short hike with my wife to Bachalpsee Lake, which is known as the "Jewel of the Alps" because of its scenic reflection of Eiger and JungFrau.

We first tried First cliff walk, where a walkway is installed right next to the vertical cliff of First, but the view from the end of the walkway was less beautiful than pictures of it I saw on the internet.


We first tried the First cliff walk, where a walkway iwas installed right next to thea vertical cliff of First, but. However, the view from the end of the walkway was less beautiful than many pictures of it I saw on the internet. We first tried the First cliff walk, where a walkway was installed right next to a vertical cliff. However, the view from the end of the walkway was less beautiful than many pictures on the internet.

The hike was pleasant and enjoyable, but the view of the lake was, to be honest, very disappointing, because the cloudy weather made the view nothing but just a body of water -- Where was the jewel?!


The hike was pleasant and enjoyable, but the view of the lake was, to be honest, very disappointing, because t. The cloudy weather made the view nothing but just a body of water -- Where was the without any "jewel?!." The hike was pleasant and enjoyable, but the view of the lake was, to be honest, very disappointing. The cloudy weather made the view nothing but just a body of water without any "jewel."

But, on our way back to the cable car station after the disappointing experience, the weather was getting better and better, and finally the clouds were completely gone and we could see an overwhelming view of the mountains.


ButFortunately, on our way back to the cable car station after the disappointing experience, the weather was getting better andgradually got better, and finally the clouds were completely gone and we could see an overwhelming view of the mountains. Fortunately, on our way back to the cable car station after the disappointing experience, the weather gradually got better, and finally the clouds were completely gone and we could see an overwhelming view of the mountains.

I even started to regret to take a hike to Bachalpsee Lake, so it made this hike even more rewarding and eventually I could consider the trail was worth to take.


I even started to regret to take a hike toaking the Bachalpsee Lake, so it made hike, so this hike become even more rewarding and eventually I could consider the trail was worth to takeaking. I even started to regret taking the Bachalpsee Lake hike, so this hike become even more rewarding and eventually I could consider the trail was worth taking.

After we arrived back at the cable car station, we had lunch at a restaurant nearby.


I enjoyed a lot (but I was not happy about the price, it was too expensive!)


I enjoyed a lot (but I was not happy about the price,; it was too expensive!) I enjoyed a lot (but I was not happy about the price; it was too expensive!)

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