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Grandma and Smartphone

My grandma is ninety-ish. She went out a lot before the Covid-19 pandemic. In the begginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad. It took a long time for her to be a couch potatoes. We started to teach her how to use phone for surfing on the net in order to ease her anxious. She is a fast learner. She soon knows how to search news and chat with friends on wechat. Since then, she spends some time on the phone, around 2 hours for each day. And now, She is glued to her phone like most of us young people.
The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live aborad. They can meet via video calls. There are no time or space limited.
But the negative saide is that she is suffering from the neck-pain and eyesores. We told her to go out more and rest more. But she is so addicted.
We believe that she is in her second childhood.

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My grandma is ninety-ish.

She went out a lot before the Covid-19 pandemic.

She is a fast learner.

They can meet via video calls.

We told her to go out more and rest more.

But she is so addicted.

We believe that she is in her second childhood.

My grandma is ninety-ish.

She went out a lot before the Covid-19 pandemic.

She is a fast learner.

They can meet via video calls.

We told her to go out more and rest more.

But she is so addicted.

We believe that she is in her second childhood.

There are no time or space limited.


There are nrestrictions to time or space limited. There are restrictions to time or space.

There are no time or space limitedations. There are no time or space limitations.

There are no limits to time or space limited. There are no limits to time or space.

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My grandma is ninety-ish.


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She went out a lot before the Covid-19 pandemic.


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In the begginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad.


InAt the begginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad. At the beginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad.

"When the pandemic hit she couldn't stand staying inside." this makes it sound more natural usually when we say "x......so bad...." we do something like this, EX: She wanted to go out so bad that she ended up ignoring the rules and snuck out on her own.

In the begginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so badly. In the beginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so badly.

Technically, "so badly" is correct, but in all honesty, native speakers (like me) disregard that rule and say "so bad" in these cases anyway. But, better that you learn the rules first

InAt the begginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad. At the beginning of the pandemic, she wanted to go out so bad.

It took a long time for her to be a couch potatoes.


It took a long time for her to learn to be a couch potatoes. It took a long time for her to learn to be a couch potato.

It took a long time for her to be a couch potatoes. It took a long time for her to be a couch potato.

aww!

We started to teach her how to use phone for surfing on the net in order to ease her anxious.


We started to teach her how to use her phone for surfing on the net in order to ease her anxiousety. We started to teach her how to use her phone for surfing the net in order to ease her anxiety.

We started to teach her how to use her phone for surfing on the net in order to ease her anxiousety. We started to teach her how to use her phone for surfing the net in order to ease her anxiety.

I think the word "restlessness" would be more appropriate than "anxiety" based on the description of your grandma wanting to leave the house

We started to teach her how to use a phone for surfing on the net in order for her to ease her anxiousety. We started to teach her how to use a phone for surfing the net in order for her to ease her anxiety.

She is a fast learner.


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She soon knows how to search news and chat with friends on wechat.


She soon knowsquickly learned how to search for news and chat with friends on wecWeChat. She quickly learned how to search for news and chat with friends on WeChat.

She soon knowsew how to search the news and chat with friends on wecWeChat. She soon knew how to search the news and chat with friends on WeChat.

She soon knowsew how to search the news and chat with friends on wechat. She soon knew how to search the news and chat with friends on wechat.

Since then, she spends some time on the phone, around 2 hours for each day.


Since then, she spends sommore time on ther phone, around 2 hours for each day. Since then, she spends more time on her phone, around 2 hours each day.

Since then, she spends sommore time on ther phone, around 2 hours for eachper day. Since then, she spends more time on her phone, around 2 hours per day.

Since then,Now she spends some time on the phone, around 2 hours for each day.around 2 hours a day on her phone, Now she spends around 2 hours a day on her phone,

And now, She is glued to her phone like most of us young people.


And now, Sshe is glued to her phone like most of us young people. And now, she is glued to her phone like most of us young people.

That's funny :)

And now, She is glued to her phone like most of us young people. She is glued to her phone like most of us young people.

hahaha

The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live aborad.


The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live aboroad. The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live abroad.

The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live aboroad. The positive side is she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live abroad.

The positive side is that she has something to kill the time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live aboroad. The positive side is that she has something to kill time and she is able to keep in touch with her friends who live abroad.

They can meet via video calls.


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But the negative saide is that she is suffering from the neck-pain and eyesores.


But the negative saide is that she is suffering from the neck-pain and eyesores. But the negative side is that she is suffering from the neck-pain and eyesores.

But the negative saide is that she is suffering from the neck- pain and eye soreness. But the negative side is that she is suffering from neck pain and eye soreness.

Oh no :(

But tThe negative saide, however, is that she is suffering from the neck- pain and eyesores. The negative side, however, is that she is suffering from neck pain and eyesore.

We told her to go out more and rest more.


We told her to go out more and rest more. We told her to go out and rest more.

You don't have to put "more" twice

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But she is so addicted.


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We believe that she is in her second childhood.


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