Dec. 25, 2020
Translation
Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son and he wants to buy his son a new car. His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school. Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car.
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Translation
Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car. Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car.
His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school.
His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year so he can cycle to school.
Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car.
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I checked your other translations too. The commas I insert aren't necessary, I think, but it is technically correct to use a comma and conjunction to connect two independent clauses. (Based on what I remember from grade school grammar.)
Dec. 26, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son and he wants to buy his son a new car. Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car. Tomorrow is the birthday of Mr. Yun’s son, and he wants to buy his son a new car. |
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His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year, so he can cycle to school.
His son wants to learn Chinese medicine in Xi’an next year |
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Mr. Yun thinks it’s a good idea to buy a new car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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