June 11, 2026
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3rd grade in elementary school. Suddenly my height increased fastly, I was taller than most of the other girls in my class and I started to bend over to cover up this issue. At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates, the result was clear. I gained weight as well in a short period of time, it accompanied myself until high school. At a certain point I told myself that I will never be fat anymore and lost weight in a very short time, unfortunately I developed an eating disorder: anorexia nervosa. My parents send me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which was completely destroyed due to years of bullying. Once I left the hospital, my life continued to be normal until I met a men in my life who told me that I am fat, even though my weight was completely normal. I got very insecure and fell right into the eating disorder again. This time, I learned from it and left this men. For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he did mention it in a very nice and supportive way. A part of mine still connected my body weight with the rest of myself as a person, means if my weight is low, I am a good woman, who will be loved and accepted, but if it's high, I am not worth being loved in every way. Everything changed when I became a mom, this time I gained 20 kilos and this time I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process. Motherhood made me realise that the only thing that matters is how I feel, not what is written on the scale. I lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far and realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with herself, and I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
Losing Weight in Adulthood
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal, until I started 3rd grade inof elementary school.
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal, until I started 3rd grade of elementary school.
Suddenly, my height increased fastly,quickly, and I was taller than most of the other girls in my class and, so I started to bending over to cover up this issuehide this.
Suddenly, my height increased quickly, and I was taller than most of the other girls in my class, so I started bending over to hide this.
At the same time, I also started to binge eating sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates, t. The result was clear.
At the same time, I also started binge eating sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates. The result was clear.
I gained weight as well in a short period of time, and it accompanied myselfe up until high school.
I gained weight in a short period of time, and it accompanied me up until high school.
I'm not sure if you want to say "up until high school" or "all throughout high school," but it is one of these depending on how long you remained overweight.
At a certain point, I told myself that I will neverdon't want to be fat anymore, and I lost weight in a very short time, u. Unfortunately, I then developed another eating disorder: anorexia nervosa.
At a certain point, I told myself that I don't want to be fat anymore, and I lost weight in a very short time. Unfortunately, I then developed another eating disorder: anorexia nervosa.
My parents sendt me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which washad been completely destroyed due to years of bullying.
My parents sent me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which had been completely destroyed due to years of bullying.
Once I left the hospital, my life continued to beon as normal, until I met a men in my lifean who told me that I amwas fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
Once I left the hospital, my life continued on as normal, until I met a man who told me that I was fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
I got very insecure and fell right into the eating disorder again.
This time, I learned from it, and left this menm.
This time, I learned from it, and left him.
For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he did mentioned it to me in a very nice and supportive way.
For some reason, the same issue happened when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he mentioned it to me in a very nice and supportive way.
A part of mine still connecteds my body weight with the rest of myself as a person, meanswhich means (I feel that) if my weight is low, (then) I am a good woman, who will be loved and accepted, b. But if it's high, I am not worthy of being loved in every way.
A part of me still connects my body weight with the rest of myself as a person, which means (I feel that) if my weight is low, (then) I am a good woman who will be loved and accepted. But if it's high, I am not worthy of being loved in every way.
Everything changed when I became a mom, t. This time, I gained 20 kilos, and this time I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process.
Everything changed when I became a mom. This time, I gained 20 kilos, and I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process.
Motherhood made me realise that the only thing that matters is how I feel, not what is written on the scale.
I've lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far, and have realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with herself, andmy body. I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
I've lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far, and have realised that I am the only person who needs to be happy with my body. I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
When you say, "I am the only person who needs to be happy with herself," it almost sounds like you're saying that other people don't need to be happy with themselves. It's difficult for me to explain why, but using "my body" here just sounds more natural.
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I'm very sorry that you've struggled with eating disorders off and on throughout your life, and especially sorry that you had to deal with bullying not only from your peers, but from your romantic partner as well. I'm very glad that your mindset has shifted. And you're right; our bodies are machines that are capable of incredible things. To reduce our worthiness down to our weight is to reduce so much of what our bodies can do. Take care <3
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3third grade in elementary school.
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started third grade in elementary school.
Suddenly my height increased fastly,I grew a lot, and I was taller than most of the other girls in my class and, so I started to bending over to cover up this issueit up.
Suddenly I grew a lot, and I was taller than most of the other girls in my class, so I started bending over to cover it up.
At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates, the result was clearing candy during that time, in order to deal with my classmates bullying me. The effects are obvious.
I also started binge eating candy during that time, in order to deal with my classmates bullying me. The effects are obvious.
The correction "The effects are obvious." was the only natural way I could phrase it, but it's not the most natural English.
I also gained weight as well in a short period of time,very quickly, and it accompanied myselfe until high school.
I also gained weight very quickly, and it accompanied me until high school.
At a certainsome point I told myself that I will'd never be fat anymoregain, and I lost weight in a very short time, uextremely quickly. Unfortunately, however, I developed an eating disorder: anorexia nervosa.
At some point I told myself that I'd never be fat again, and I lost weight extremely quickly. Unfortunately, however, I developed an eating disorder: anorexia nervosa.
My parents sendt me to the hospital tso I could gain weight and to restore my mental health, which was completely destroyed due to myears of bullying.
My parents sent me to the hospital so I could gain weight and to restore my mental health, which was destroyed due to my bullying.
Again, I'm not the best corrector, so I'll warn you to be careful about the phrase I used ("my bullying"); without the context of the passage, it's unclear whether or not you were bullying someone or if you yourself were bullied.
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When I left the hospital, nothing happened until I met a man who told me that I was fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
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I got more insecure and fell back into my eating disorder.
This time, I learned from it and left this menm.
This time, I learned from it and left him.
For some reason, the same issuething happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he did mentioned it in a very nice and supportive way.
For some reason, the same thing happened when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he mentioned it in a nice and supportive way.
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Motherhood changed everything, I gained twenty kilograms, and this time I finally found the strength to overcome it.
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Motherhood made me realize that the only thing that matters is how I feel, not what the scale says.
You spelled realize correctly, but I'm an American speller, so I spelt "realize" the American way and not the British way. (But "realise" is equally correct.)
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So far, I lost almost ten kilograms by myself, and realized that I'm the only one who needs to be happy with myself, and that I shouldn't let other people's words influence me.
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3rd grade in elementary school.
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3rd grade.
Suddenly my height increased fastquickly, I was taller than most of the other girls in my class and, so I started to bend over to cover uphide this issue.
Suddenly my height increased quickly, I was taller than most of the other girls in my class, so I started to bend over to hide this issue.
You can also say "Suddenly I hit a growth spurt, quickly becoming taller than most of the other girls in my class, so I started to bend over to hide this issue."
At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates, the result was clear.
At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates.
The result was clear, I gained weight as well in a short period of time, it accompanied myselfstayed that way until high school.
The result was clear, I gained weight in a short period of time, it stayed that way until high school.
At a certain point I told myself that I will never be fat anymore and lost a lot of weight in a very short time, u. Unfortunately Ithis led to me developeding an eating disorder: called anorexia nervosa.
At a certain point I told myself that I will never be fat anymore and lost a lot of weight in a very short time. Unfortunately this led to me developing an eating disorder called anorexia nervosa.
My parents sendt me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which was completely destroyed due to years of bullying.
My parents sent me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which was completely destroyed due to years of bullying.
Once I left the hospital, my life continued to be normal until I met a mean in my life who told me that I am fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
Once I left the hospital, my life continued to be normal until I met a man in my life who told me that I am fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
I got very insecure and fell right into the eating disorder again.
This time, I learned from it and left this mean.
This time, I learned from it and left this man.
For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he did mentioned it in a very nice and supportive way.
For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he mentioned it in a very nice and supportive way.
A part of mine still connected my body weight with the rest of my self-worth as a person, means i. If my weight is low, I am a good woman, who will be loved and accepted, but if it's high, I am not worth being loved in everany way.
A part of me still connected my body weight with my self-worth as a person. If my weight is low, I am a good woman, who will be loved and accepted, but if it's high, I am not worth being loved in any way.
Everything changed when I became a mom, this time I gained 20 kilos and this timebut I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process.
Everything changed when I became a mom, this time I gained 20 kilos but I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process.
Motherhood made me realise that the only thing that matters is how I feel, not what is written on the scale.
I lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far and realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with hermyself, and I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
I lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far and realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with myself, and I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
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So sorry to hear about your painful experience, but I am so glad that you managed to turn it around and learn to cope better. Good for you!
As for the corrections, it's just some small things to make it sound more natural.
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When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3rd grade in elementary school.
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started 3rd grade
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal until I started
When I was a child, my height and weight were always normal, until I started 3rd grade |
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Suddenly my height increased fastly, I was taller than most of the other girls in my class and I started to bend over to cover up this issue.
Suddenly my height increased You can also say "Suddenly I hit a growth spurt, quickly becoming taller than most of the other girls in my class, so I started to bend over to hide this issue."
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Suddenly, my height increased |
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At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates, the result was clear.
At the same time I also started to binge eat sweets to deal with the bullying of my classmates
The correction "The effects are obvious." was the only natural way I could phrase it, but it's not the most natural English.
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I gained weight as well in a short period of time, it accompanied myself until high school.
The result was clear, I gained weight
I also gained weight
I gained weight I'm not sure if you want to say "up until high school" or "all throughout high school," but it is one of these depending on how long you remained overweight. |
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At a certain point I told myself that I will never be fat anymore and lost weight in a very short time, unfortunately I developed an eating disorder: anorexia nervosa.
At a certain point I told myself that I will never be fat anymore and lost a lot of weight in a very short time
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My parents send me to the hospital to gain weight and restore my mental health, which was completely destroyed due to years of bullying.
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My parents sen Again, I'm not the best corrector, so I'll warn you to be careful about the phrase I used ("my bullying"); without the context of the passage, it's unclear whether or not you were bullying someone or if you yourself were bullied.
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Once I left the hospital, my life continued to be normal until I met a men in my life who told me that I am fat, even though my weight was completely normal.
Once I left the hospital, my life continued to be normal until I met a m
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I got very insecure and fell right into the eating disorder again. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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This time, I learned from it and left this men.
This time, I learned from it and left this m
This time, I learned from it and left
This time, I learned from it, and left |
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For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he did mention it in a very nice and supportive way.
For some reason, the same issue happened again when I met my current husband, who also had problems with my weight, but he
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A part of mine still connected my body weight with the rest of myself as a person, means if my weight is low, I am a good woman, who will be loved and accepted, but if it's high, I am not worth being loved in every way.
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Everything changed when I became a mom, this time I gained 20 kilos and this time I finally found the energy to overcome this painful process.
Everything changed when I became a mom, this time I gained 20 kilos
Everything changed when I became a mom |
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Motherhood made me realise that the only thing that matters is how I feel, not what is written on the scale. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Motherhood made me reali You spelled realize correctly, but I'm an American speller, so I spelt "realize" the American way and not the British way. (But "realise" is equally correct.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far and realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with herself, and I should not let the words of others influence my inner state of mind.
I lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far and realised that I am the only person, who needs to be happy with
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I've lost almost 10 kilos on my own so far, and have realised that I am the only person When you say, "I am the only person who needs to be happy with herself," it almost sounds like you're saying that other people don't need to be happy with themselves. It's difficult for me to explain why, but using "my body" here just sounds more natural. |
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