April 17, 2025
Me
I was born and raised in a small village in a farmer’s family. I lived there until I was fifteen years old.
When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study.
Three years later, I graduated from that school and was assigned to a job in another county.
After I worked there for four years, I was transferred back to the city where I had studied.
In my hometown, I have worked in three different departments, but all of them belong to the agriculture industry.
In the late eighties, I married a nurse who worked in the local traditional Chinese hospital.
The next year, we had our only child, my son. Now my son works in the fourth hospital of my city as a network engineer.
My wife retired in 2020. I have two years left before I am allowed to retire due to the different retirement ages for different genders in China.
I am not a rich person, nor is my family. All we want is to have healthy bodies and a peaceful life. I hope this for my readers too.
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When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study. When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study.
You can write 'When I turned fifteen' to avoid repetition.
Three years later, I graduated from that school and was assigned to a job in another county.
Three years later, I graduated from that school and was assigned a job in another county.
The nextIn the coming year, we had our only child, my son.
In the coming year, we had our only child, my son.
I have two years left before I am allowed to retire due to the differentce in retirement ages for different genders in China.
I have two years left before I am allowed to retire due to the difference in retirement ages for different genders in China.
All we want is to havbe healthy bodies andand have a peaceful life.
All we want is to be healthy and have a peaceful life.
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Thank you for the well wishes at the end :).
Completely agree that being healthy and peaceful is better than being rich.
April 17, 2025
Thank you very much.
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I was born and raised in a small village in a farmer’s family. |
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I lived there until I was fifteen years old. |
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When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study. When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study. When I was fifteen years old, I went to a specialized technical secondary school in my hometown to study. You can write 'When I turned fifteen' to avoid repetition. |
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Three years later, I graduated from that school and was assigned to a job in another county.
Three years later, I graduated from that school and was assigned |
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After I worked there for four years, I was transferred back to the city where I had studied. |
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In my hometown, I have worked in three different departments, but all of them belong to the agriculture industry. |
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In the late eighties, I married a nurse who worked in the local traditional Chinese hospital. |
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The next year, we had our only child, my son.
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Now my son works in the fourth hospital of my city as a network engineer. |
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My wife retired in 2020. |
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I have two years left before I am allowed to retire due to the different retirement ages for different genders in China.
I have two years left before I am allowed to retire due to the differen |
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I am not a rich person, nor is my family. |
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All we want is to have healthy bodies and a peaceful life.
All we want is to |
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I hope this for my readers too. |
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