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Feb. 4, 2022

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Illusion of choise

Hello everybody,

Today I would like to tell you about dating apps.
You know them or have a lot of experience whit using them. Maybe you think that you opened a big source of possibilities to make new contacts. It's true. But on the other hand, you have a big choice and every new contact will have less value to you. Because you can always find a new contact. It is very important to say "stop" yourself.
Thank you.

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Hello everybody,

It's true.

Thank you.

Hello everybody,

Today I would like to tell you about dating apps.

It's true.

Because you can always find a new contact.

Thank you.

Hello everybody,

Maybe you think that you opened a big source of possibilities to make new contacts.

It's true.

Because you can always find a new contact.

It is very important to say "stop" yourself.

Thank you.

Hello everybody,

Today I would like to tell you about dating apps.

It's true.

Thank you.

Illusion of choise


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We usually capitalize the important words in a title.

Illusion of choisce Illusion of choice

Illusion of choisce Illusion of choice

The Illusion of cChoisce The Illusion of Choice

Hello everybody,


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Today I would like to tell you about dating apps.


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Today I would like to tell you about dating apps. Today I would like to tell you about dating apps.

or you might say "I would like to discuss dating apps", which in my opinion would fit best here

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Today I would like to tell youalk/write about dating apps. Today I would like to talk/write about dating apps.

You know them or have a lot of experience whit using them.


You know've heard of them or have a lot of experience whit using them. You've heard of them or have a lot of experience using them.

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You might know them or might have a lot of experience whith using them. You might know them or might have a lot of experience with using them.

I would add "might" because it implies the person is likely to know dating apps and have experience with using them but it still excludes this possibility, because not 100% of people know and use dating apps. In English, you can often use "might and "may" to imply such nuances of likelihood

You know them or have a lot of experience whith using them. You know them or have a lot of experience with using them.

You know them orare probably familiar with them or perhaps you have a lot of experience whit using them. You are probably familiar with them or perhaps you have a lot of experience using them.

You may know them or have a lot of experience whith using them. You may know them or have a lot of experience with using them.

Maybe you think that you opened a big source of possibilities to make new contacts.


Maybe you think that you opened a big source of possibilities to make've thought that you've found a possible big source of new contacts. Maybe you've thought that you've found a possible big source of new contacts.

This sounds more natural in the US.

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Maybe you think that you openhave discovered a big source of possibilities to make new contacts. Maybe you think that you have discovered a big source of new contacts.

Maybe you think that you opened a big source ofthe door to a world of new possibilities to makeand new contacts. Maybe you think that you opened the door to a world of new possibilities and new contacts.

A little complicated, but more colourful

Maybe you think that you opened a big sourfound have an abundance of possibilities to make new contacts. Maybe you think that you found have an abundance of possibilities to make new contacts.

It's true.


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It's true. It's true.

Specify what is true, that you found a new way to find many people. "It is true that..."

But on the other hand, you have a big choice and every new contact will have less value to you.


But on the other hand, you have a biglot of choices and now every new contact will have less value to you because you can always find a new contact. But on the other hand, you have a lot of choices and now every new contact will have less value to you because you can always find a new contact.

But, on the other hand, you have a big choice and every new contact will have less value to you. But, on the other hand, you have a big choice and every new contact will have less value to you.

But on the other hand, you have a bigmight have too much choice and e. Every new contact will have less value to you. But on the other hand, you might have too much choice. Every new contact will have less value to you.

But on the other hand, you have a big choice andso much to choose from, that every new contact will have less value to you. But on the other hand, you have so much to choose from, that every new contact will have less value to you.

I don't like the combination "a big choice". You have ample choice You have a wide variety You have much to choose from You have a wide range of options Etc.

But on the other hand, you have a bigmany choice ands such that every new contact will have less value to you. But on the other hand, you have many choices such that every new contact will have less value to you.

Because you can always find a new contact.


Because you can always find a new contact.

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Because yYou can always find a new contact. You can always find a new contact.

Use "because" to join this phrase to the previous. Starting a new phrase with because can sound a bit clunky

BThis happens because you can always find a new contact. This happens because you can always find a new contact.

It is very important to say "stop" yourself.


It is very important to say "stop" to yourself. It is very important to say "stop" to yourself.

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It is very important to say "'stop"' to yourself. It is very important to say 'stop' to yourself.

It is very important to say "stop"tell yourself to stop. It is very important to tell yourself to stop.

It's very important to take a step back. ... to take a breather

It is very important to say "stop" yourself. It is very important to say "stop" yourself.

Perhaps what you are trying to say is that someone who uses this app should have self control? "It is very important to have self control when you are faced with so many people to choose."

Thank you.


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